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Review of The Harvest Moon  Open in new Window.
Review by Doc Xenith Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I really liked this story, it was fast paced and the action was pretty consistant. It was also refreshing to see a story where a vampire and a werewolf work together. The only real problem that I had was that character description was almost non existant. I had a hard time picturing what anyone looked like, what they wore, things of that nature. You started to do that when Jath was transforming into his wolf form, but that was really the only place and even then, the description was pretty bare-bones. Being that this was a short story, and not a chapter of a novel, or something along those lines, that is somewhat understandable that you kept descriptions to a minimum, but I still would have liked to have read something about the other characters' appearances. I would have also been interested in hearing about the necromancer's motivations and why he was doing what he was doing. Still, overall, I felt your story was an enjoyable read. Good work.
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Review of BloodRose  Open in new Window.
Review by Doc Xenith Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Wow....great story. I really enjoyed it because it was so full of original ideas and intriguing characters especially the twist at the end. Your attention to detail in this story was staggering. This just goes to show how talented of a writer you are. The only real gripe I had with the story was how it seemed to switch between first person narrative and third person perspective. Are you going to continue this? Because I'm interested in what goes on from here.
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