I'm a little late in sending this review since this story is over seven years old, but awesome job! You combined multiple fetishes into one story and listed awesome characters and storyline plots for them too! The story really hit off, and I would have to say my favorite is the weight gain section. Glad to see that you're still roaming out and about on this site, and more than willing to say thanks.
Your story was probably the first I ran across when I first signed up to this site, and inspired me to create my own pokemon interactive that has really hit off to a great start. You actually helped become the writer I am today with this story, as weird as it may sound. Congrats!
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