The tone is the center of this poem, and it is both graceful and startling. The language you have chosen together with the shortened line and direct manner conveys that powerful image in a thoroughly engaging manner, and the concentration in the verse makes the images valuable and clear. And how you handle the idea that revolution is a state that begins as a soft throbbing within is a thing of beauty coupled with the poet's power in the last line to liberate what has too long and painfully been binded. Great work and I look forward to reading more! Cheers, A.
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