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Review of Wording  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello! I am impressed by this haiku poem. The whole stanza can be read as a complete sentence while fitting the 5-7-5 syllable pattern. I believe adding a period at the end of the poem would be the cherry on top. It would complete the poem the same way it would a story.

When I first read this haiku, I immediately related to your feelings when writing poetry. It can be extremely difficult to fit syllable and rhyming patterns together while trying to convey a clear message. That I can tell you from experience. Again, well done on this haiku! Good luck on your future writing projects.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hopefully this donation of 10,000 Gift Points gets into this group. If this fails to get to you, please help me find a way to send an appropriate donation.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is the most amazing story that I've read all year! I couldn't stop reading it. I didn't see any errors in spelling or grammar, so that makes it even better!

I wish you luck on your future writing projects, and have a happy new year!

~ Howler of the Moon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I'm interested in looking at this group, but upon seeing the age range I froze. I'm sixteen and I have plenty of ideas for animations, comics, the whole shebang. Do I really need to be eighteen and over to join the group?
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Rated: E | (1.0)
This story has potential, but there are a lot of things that need to be fixed. Break apart most of the sentences into smaller ones and leave out the parts that appear more than once. Also tell the reader why Ka:u set Kamin on fire and sent the villagers and Utin running. Give the 'Rocky' near the end of the third paragraph a lower case 'r', that is unless it is the name of the stream. There are countless grammar errors, but with a little proofreading and editing it can be fixed.

This item has a great story to tell. With the editing it can be made better.

I hope you found this review helpful in this and your future items. Keep writing and have fun at WDC!

~ Howler of the Moon
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Review of Guardian Angel  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an amazing poem. I love how you describe the presence of your guardian angel and I don't see any spelling problems. Well done! Good luck with your future writing projects!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a really good story. You did very well of writing the plot, but there are a few punctuation errors. However everything else is perfect. Keep up the good work and have fun at Writing.com.
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Review of Bedpost.  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
I love the story behind this poem. However there is a problem with the fact that there is no punctuation. It was difficult to tell which part began and which ended. You should try to find out how to properly punctuate in poetry such as this.

I still love the story depicted in this poem. I also admire how you use pattern in this too. Keep writing and learning from mistakes. These are the best strategies used to improve your writing. Therefore keep up the great work!
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Review of Significant.  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really like how this poem is constructed. It has a strong hook and theme. The spelling is perfect! It makes it easy to read. Keep up the good work and keep writing! *BigSmile*
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Review of Fairy  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a very good preface. I like how you describe the narrator's experience of turning into a fairy. I can see it in my head as I read it. Great job.
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Review of Sakura  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (3.0)
This is a lovely poem. I like how the narrator addresses his love of his loved ones in the end. However I would like to see how people show their love for him after his death.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is an amazing story. I like the gloomy beginning and the ending. Eva got to be with her father again!
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Review of Alaska2004  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
These pictures look like they have been taken by professionals. Good job!
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Review of Black Box  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Interesting! I wounder what's in the box. :)
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is an impressive opening to this novel. Good job.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
This was is a really awsome story! I especially love the twist between the two lovers.
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Review of I Am  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a really cool poem.
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Review of What It's Worth  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This poem really touched me. My heart sank as I kept reading this.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is one of the best stories I have read.
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