Written fairly well, but not well thought through doctrinally or according to biblical truth. We did all come from God, but certainly not all will return to God. "He came to His own, but His own received Him not". "And this is the condemnation, that light has come into the world, but men loved darkness more than the light, because their deeds were evil." Whenever I write, I'm always careful to be sensitive with regard to the truth. It's very easy to think that you are communicating one thing that is on your heart to say, but communicate something else.Keep writing for the Lord, but be careful...
Of course, there are many who don't beleive that the bible is God's word. In that case, my comment will be of little value...