I thought you did a great job on this piece according to the Writer's Cramp prompt. You wrote this just like a newspaper article would have been written on a serious crime. I liked the way you showed emotion in your characters, making the story even more believable. I especially liked the humor in the overall article. Keep up the great writing and good luck in the contest!
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This is a very well-wriiten poem, Bianca. I like this poetry technique, and you did a wonderful job of describing these two characters in this Prime and reversed Prime poem. I don't see a thing that I would change in this poem. This poem has a beautiful appearance, and the word that you've chosen really brings out the beauty of creation. Keep up the great writing!
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A very cute poll for children and the young at heart. I love Dr. Suess. I read in an article once that he was rejected 27 times, before he was published. I think that's what keeps me going. Keep up the good writing!
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Another great form of poetry, Bianca! The different forms make poetry week so much more special. I wish I had of read the "cramp" yesterday, but the entries for this form were superb.
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Another great creation of writing.com. This is an excellent way for more writers to get reviewed, and as you stated, "To encourage members to meet by reviewing each other's work." Thank you for making my last three years a community not only of talented writers, but truly wonderful friends. I'm so glad to be back "home" again.I had to use my gift points to renew my membership, but my new visa will be here anyday, now. I'm looking forward to getting back my premium membership asap.
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I think this gift point reward system is a great incentive! This article explains how the system works very clearly. I love giving gift points, so this is more for me to give to deserving authors old and new of Writing.com. Thank you for the many ways you make this the best writing site on the web.
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This is a very creative contest. You put a lot of effort into describing rules and regulations, that are very clear and precise. I like your contest logo, too!
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This article is very informative, helpful, and an asset to every member of Writing.com. Thank you for creating and sharing this with us. I would highly recommend this to all new and old members, alike.(e:smile}
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Wow, how exciting. Your creativity never ceases to amaze me, which is why I will never let my membership expire with writing.com. Thank you so much for bringing us your latest invention.
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A wonderful group that continues to grow. I don't know how I missed rating this, lol. I was just looking over the list to see who was still in this group, and I found that I never rated. So many links...so little time, lol. Thank you for all the time that you put in to this group, Stallion!
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A very good forum for those nasty critters, lol. Do you want us to post only the bugs that we encounter on writing.com? I just got rid of parasites in my browser (Internet Explorer). I aquired these from downloading, but not sure from which site...probably not this one. Thank you for posting this for us all.
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A good survey. These Merit badges have been an excellent way to let the members of our community let them know how much they are appreciated. Thank you for all you do and provide for us.
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Another great Chapter, Jim! Again, your descriptions are vivid, and makes your readers feel as though we're watching a movie. I sure hope you can get this book published. It deserves to be available in book stores. Your dates really help bring the reader to that time period, as well as your descriptive dialogue and narration.
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This is the most beautiful memorial I've ever seen. I feel as though I know her, from what I've read. She was truly a special person, and always will be. I wish I had of had the pleasure of knowing her personally, but this novel is the next best thing. I can't thank you enough for sharing all of this with us!
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What a beautiful image, created by you and made by Ashley. I feel sure, Linda would be so proud of you, Jim. Carrying on her memories, that she held so dear, is so very special. I think you were both very blessed by God.
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Wow, the more I read, the more I can't put it down, lol. It's 4:00am, and I'm still reading. The was another great chapter. Each one is so unique, and draws much emotion. I noticed you put the Prom picture in, already. A perfect touch...to a perfect romance. Description, again was awesome! You do such a great job, showing the emotions of both of you.
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Simply, Wonderful, Jim! You have such deep emotions in all of these chapters but, especially true in this chapter. I really liked the way that Linda, tells us what she is thinking, too. This really adds to the story. The climax was perfectly written. Although, I thought Linda had something to do with the girl in the orchestra that fainted, you still did a great job of keeping the reader in suspense. A terrific job, my friend!
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A very good chapter, Jim! I like the way you put in your recent conversations with your father, on this subject. It's amazing when we look back on our lives, and try to figure out why we made certain decisions, without a clue to why we did. (as your father did.) I believe that's why life is a learning experience, for us all. Very descriptive, I can envision you worrying over this decision. Another great piece in your novel!
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You wrote this just like a newspaper article would have been written on a serious crime. I liked the way you showed emotion in your characters, making the story even more believable. I especially liked the humor in the overall article. Keep up the great writing and good luck in the contest!
