I like the moral embedded within the story and how there was a sort of ironic or poetic ending to it. It goes to show that you can never judge a book by its cover, as you never know how you can benefit when you decide to be nice to someone, regardless of how people my judge you because of it.
I liked the way that the story was written; it was almost poetic in nature. There was a lot of specific descriptiveness throughout the whole story. I also enjoyed the ending when I discovered that it was who the main character was talking to and how much the character enjoyed reliving his memory with his child.
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