Great writing. I'm sure your just continuing with your trend of great poetry, but I just had to say it. As I said with your other poetry it's great just remember to have fun with your writing. This poem here has a nice steady flow which is very nice. Keep up the good work.
Loved it. It was fantastic. This I believe is my favorite so far of the pieces I have read. Even though it doesn't really follow any rhyme meter it seems you had a lot more fun with this one:
"I was an Armadillo once,
but that got boring,
so now I pretend
that I don't really care.
Not that I do,
do wah, do wah do wah ditty,
talk about the girl from New York City."
This I believe is my favorite part I don't believe I have every read a poem where someone actually used the word Armadillo. You had fun with it so you just have to have more fun writing your others. Keep up the good work.
Not one of my most favorite poems, but it is still very well written. You use a great aray of words to describe everything that you feel in your poetry. The symbolism you used describing crushed and run over emotions as roadkill, although slightly nausiating to think of roadkill, is a very good descriptive word. Keep up the good writing and try something happier.
You make a great amount of information seem so simple with the way you speak about the different Writing.com setups. Lots of the things that you wrote I didn't know about until I read them in your writing and I'm sure many other people had questions about the same things you wrote about and described. Good work and writing.
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