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Rated: E · Poetry · Personal · #1096548

a senryu for spring



BEGINNINGS

you and I, a minyan
the promised land is wholeness
together we call spring


Author's note:A minyan is a Jewish term denoting a minimum number of participants for prayer. Generally, ten people.


yes, yes, I know the syllable count is wrong *Cry*
realized that after I posted...well...what the heck...I like it anyway. Some schools of thought aren't so rigid about the syllables anyway.*Bigsmile*


Written for: "Haiku and Senryu: A Contest and More...." 
received an honorable mention



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