This is a poem I wrote, any feedback on it would be really really appreciated. |
In waking I find no solace From the pain that grips my heart, Like an iron fist it clutches My soul Thus it is in sleeping; I tumble through that Thunderous sky Trying to find some meaning I reveal my deepest darkest secrets to the night. And finally I fall upon a dusty road, Filled with echoes of some other life I stumble forwards through incoherent dreams. I reach the end of the road And find a barren wasteland Upon whose sands The blood of human life forgotten Lies forever in the mud A single poppy flower is growing. I look up to the heavens And cry in anger But I get no answer. I see friends lying dead Confused, deceived and misled We thought we were fighting for freedom For friends, families and home, Instead we find ourselves smeared in oil Now I am trapped behind the metal bars of my cage I cannot escape I turn, all I see are these grey walls I scratch a face onto one So I might not be alone. There are people standing over me Laughing, taunting and spitting And I wonder are we not the same? We may be different in colour, belief and The identities that we hide behind But we are the same: men of the human race Why am I lesser than you? I may never know. And so I sleep Until I may be needed Tumbling on the dusty road As the storm rages on Flying through incoherent dreams. |