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I had nothing to do and so this was thrown together in I don't know how much time. Its kind of thoughts that have repeated in my head and probably others as well. Anyways, its not my best; I'd kind of like it more if it were separated but I don't know. And seems to end abruptly I think...
Please give thoughts and advice.
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I sit here unsatisfied
And I'm wondering why

Maybe its my friends
They're pretty nice
Though not all get commends
What should be my offer price?

Maybe its my family
They're pretty cool
But they undervalue me
I'll show them I'm no fool

Maybe its my health
I'm pretty wholesome
Yet I don't feel the wealth
'Guess I'll set a rule of thumb

Maybe its my grades
They're pretty good
I'm a Jack of all trades
Yet I don't give all I should

So much can be wrong
Who can I blame?
Who went along?
That is me I must name
Though others played a part
I had brought it on
I wasn't exactly smart
But now it is dawn:
From now on until death,
I shall choose cautiously
and live ever cloudlessly
and never hold my breath

I sit here more than satisfied
I now know how to fly


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