Query Letter

My attempt at a query letter for Shadows.

Sarah
1213 My Street,
My Town, My World xxxxx
111-555-7777
[e-mail]

14th July 2009
Writing dot com,
Your Town, Your World xxxxx

Attention: Mystic_Writer

Dear Mystic_Writer,
Most people don't realise, but family is the most important. The bond in each family is stronger than we all know. Our fathers, our mothers, our brothers and our sisters -- they all play an important role in our lives. One of the closest to us in our family is our siblings. Their age groups are mostly closer to ours, which creates a stronger understanding between each other. "Last Moments"  describes the bond between two sisters so powerful that not even death can break. I truly believe this story will be well-fitted for Shadows and so would like to make a contribution on my part.

Sincerely,
Sarah K.
111-555-7777
[e-mail]

Encl:
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"Last Moments", a short story.