A day in the life of a Makarians

Seth was a average sixteen yearold who live on the out skirts of a town called "Rust". The town was a basic refugee camp under control of the human rebels. The rebels were violent and corrupt. There leader had control over almost everything. Seth was one of the few to be chosen to be come a rebel in the future. Next week Seth was going to be taken from his house to become a rebel, but he had other plans in mind. Seth went out to go mine for scraps of iron, the basic money on Earth VI. Seth had been working and came up with about 2 pounds of scrap. He walk the dusty roads of Rust with his bag of scrap, he had just enough to illegally buy a 50 cal. pistol.
The sun had now gone down and the rebels were patrolling the streets and if they saw any one out they would fire at will. Seth had to seek to the junk yard. He hugged the wall and looked both ways and there was two commanders looking away. Seth bolted down the street to the junk yard and one of the commanders saw him and started to shoot. Seth ran down an ally and started to climb the fence with his knife in his mouth. The rebels skidded into the ally as Seth cut the barbed wrier and jumped over. Bullets were flying all over and one skinned Seth's left eye brow. The commanders pulled out there radios and spoke quickly saying "Object got away. Aborting hunt."
Seth sat on the ground and pulled out a box with indents of shapes, triangles, circles, and other one like so. He then put it on the ground and stomped on it. A few moments later a ship started to land in front of Seth. It was so life like. The ship had a light green scaly texture with dark green stripes. It had to anti in the front and the boarding dock was on its under side where stairs descended the the ground. Seth walked to the end of the stairs wile a tall wolf like figure stood on two hind paws. The figure spoke in a proud deep voice. "You have called for rescue Seth Heart?." He did not give Seth time to speak. " I am Zami and I am from the Makarian race. You are to come with me."
Makarians looked like wolfs with a fox's head. All Makarians are bio mechs and have one or more body parts missing. The missing body part is replaced with steel replicas and had wires the hung lose or protected by glass. This gave them control of the body part. There fur was not thick and reveled there black rough skin. They wore amor that looked like studded leather with loose red rags of cloth. Maraians often also had braces on there wrist and lower hind legs. The braces on there arms held knifes, bullets, or some other type of weapon. Zami's missing body part was his heart. wires hung lose from his chest pumping blood into his fake heart.
Zami and the Seth went to Mars IV, the Makarian home planet next to Earth VI.
The human rebels and the Makarians were at war. Unlike the rebels , Makarians were pure , but instinct killers. One Makarian could kill 10 commanders in 5 seconds ripping each limb from limb. Seth and Zami started to talk to one another. "Zami..." said Seth. "What is to become of me?"
Zami Replied. "Seth, you are one of the few who will join us. You will drink from the Apopa fruit and be bitten by a Makarian. This will make you one of us , but a vicious killer."
Seth remained quit and then the imperial Makars took him to a temple with strange plant life around it. The plants had apopa fruits growing on them. Seth took one and bit into one. It was filled with juice but when the first drop reached Seth's mouth his eyes became empty, his body became stiff, and he fell to the floor.
Seth woke up in a white room were Zami stood there looking at him. "Its time for you to become one of us." Zami leaped at Seth and bit Seth's leg.Seth began to struggle away from Zami. Zami tore the skin off of Seth's leg and then began to chew Seth's leg off. Seth screamed in pain and Zami had taken Seth's leg off. The Makars would now take him to get his bio mechs body part wile he slowly transformed into one of them.
Once the transformation was done Seth was no longer human... or sain. All Seth focuse now was "Kill...kill...kill, kill, Kill!"
Zami looked at Seth and told him self "What have we've done."
The Makarians locked up Seth and flew him back over to the scrap yard of Rust and Zami, Seth, and the Makars started to kill the rebels. The whole rebel army was defeated by mostly Seth. He saw the commander who shot at him and took hid claws and dug them into his spine Then took his other hand and grabbed him by his neck. Seth ripped him in half.
Rust was covered in dead rebels. All of the rebels were dead. every one but the leader.Zami stood back at the ship waiting for Seth to find and kill the leader. Seth found the rebel leader cowering against a wall pleading for mercy. Seth stomped on the leader and them made his way back to Zami. Zami began to paise Seth. Seth had his eyes set at Zami's heart and said under his breath "Kill..."
Seth took out his 50 cal. pistol and shot Zami's heart.