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This is all I have so far, I'm kind of stuck. This is for my best friend, who has had some really big personal problems and personal demons to work through. This is a VERY rough draft! These are just the lines that I've been able to come up with at this point of time. The first two lines came to me while lying in bed one night thinking about her. I would love opinions of what I have so far. Thank you!



As your sould aches,
My heart breaks.

Your life you must now reclaim,
to begin to live without shame.

You have already paid,
For mistakes that were made.

In blood and in tears,
For way too many years.