DONT YOU FEEL IT??!!!

i ask that you review because this was a poem staright from the heart and my best one yet!

dont you feel it?
That distance?
That feeling of lost?
Me?
Dont you feel as if im gone?
and your still here
without me?
tell me that you feel it,
that distance.
Between me and you,
but its not just you
Its everyone.
Im sinking
your rising.
dont you see it?
that distance?
dont you feel it?
That love that was once there,
do you feel it anymore?
Because I dont
not at all.
Dont you see were not closing in on each other,
but rather seperating from each other?
your losing me
I can see it
But im not losing you
Because I still have the tthought of you.
But dont you feel empty?
lost?
without me?
we are seperating i know
but dont you feel that?
does it make a diffrence?
Is your life diffrent?
With me slowly fading away
In the quick sand?
But dont you feel it?
Did we even have it?
did I make a diffrence in your life
Like you did in mines?
I think im gone with the thought of you
So.......
Do you even feel it anymore?
My presence?
Dont you feel it?
That im gone?