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Poetic expressions Week 2- Cinquain-about hiding sorrow

Thaw

Winter,
sky crisp with chill
and trees stripped bare with truth.
No use hiding sorrow in ice;
Tears thaw.


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Cinquain
2/4/6/8/2 Syllables


Above: Revised version

Thaw

Winter
The sky so clear
The trees stripped down to truth
No use hiding sorrow in ice
Tears thaw

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