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Could use help with the title! Thanks! =D ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Untitled Death stared at me, whilst I stared back It sighed, disappointed, and took my hand. Its grip soft, yet hard, its walk slow, yet steady, its shoulders straight, head high, yet its face, defeated We walked on and the world it turned dark and dreary, we walked miles upon miles, yet death did not weary. Finally, we stopped and came upon a door, majestic and grand a sight to behold. But the voices therein were a dichotomy so, The door a happy mask to the sadness below. Death turned to look, Its eyes a sad question for why had I come When my life was yet splendor Unwanted was I, my time had not come As unwanted, said I In the life I forsook. Death nodded, yet sad Many like you have come, but I shall hope and pray That one day ye are pardoned.. The door he thus opened and I took my leave. As friends we departed, a woeful friend indeed. |