poem for my husband for Valentines and for the traditional poetry contest. please review. |
Splendid Love Love is a splendid breath of fresh air, It makes me feel like I'm at a fair. It makes me happy, Not at all sappy. It makes me feel complete. I like this feeling we share, It’s a dream I can’t describe, so I don’t dare. A marvelous feeling, deep in my heart, I hope we are never apart. You complete me and I you. We took the oath, so our love lasts forever, We took on the marriage endeavor. I love you and you love me too. I know we will never be through, I see it when you look at me, then my heart will melt. |