Meeting the day and being grateful. Contest Entry for Birthday Bash 2014. |
| Early morning dawn awakens It greets the day on fiery wisps Calling out, its still voice beckons Take up your boat and head far out Beyond the lands - grand, hold about Sit and marvel, let silence dance And you will find your perfect trance. The form is a Saraband. There are 7 lines with 8 syllables in each. It has a rhyming pattern in the French version: a.x.a....b.b.c.c. As for including conventions: I have used assonance: -lands grand -boat and out can be depending on your pronunciation -its still I have used personification; -in that the land holds onto the person -in that the silence dances I have also used the photograph from: http://teomy.deviantart.com/art/boat-155832051 |