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Rated: 13+ · Short Story · Nature · #2354161

Even an exciting dream can become a nightmare.

Plunge Into The Unknown

          I had spent every spare night sketching the horizon in my mind, filling it with the gleaming promise of sunrise, the gentle drift of a sailboat gliding over a glassy lake. I told myself that the world seen from 1,650 feet would be a cathedral of light, a sanctuary where all of my exciting ideas would finally come true. I never imagined that the sky could betray me, that the very air that should have lifted me could become a vortex of dread.

          The morning of the ascent was still. The ground was a tapestry of mist and dew, and the balloon, a massive, scarlet envelope stitched together like a wounded beast. The pilot, a weathered man named Jeb with a beard the color of old ash, greeted me with a curt nod. "Ready?" he asked, his voice a low rasp. I nodded, feeling the tremor of anticipation settle into my spine like a cold finger.

          We lifted gently; the burner's roared a distant whisper as the basket rose above the treetops. The world fell away in layers: the farmhouses, the river that snaked through the valley like a silver starfish clinging to the earth. I watched the water's surface ripple, and for a fleeting second I thought I saw a sailboat drifting lazily beneath the clouds, its white canvas a phantom silhouette against the sunrise. The air smelled of pine and ozone, and my heart beat in time with the thrum of the flame.

          At 1,200 feet, the wind shifted. A sudden gust slammed the balloon's side, and the basket lurched, sending a jolt of panic through my gut. The clouds thickened, blending into a dark, roiling mass that swirled with a malevolent purpose. I glanced down and saw the river twist into a monstrous whirlpool, a black eye devouring everything in its path.

          My breath caught as I realized that the whirlpool was not confined to the river. The vortex appeared to stretch upward, a spiraling column of water and air that defied all-natural law.

          Above it, the clouds churned and a narrow funnel began to form, a thin, spiraling column that reached upward. In the distance, the world was lit by a sudden flash of lightning, and a waterspout erupted from the center of the vortex, spearing the sky with a violent, twisting column of rain and wind.

          The balloon shuddered as the waterspout brushed against the envelope. The heat from the burner clanged against the sudden deluge, as water seeped through its seams. I could feel the basket tilt dangerously, the rope that tethered us to the ground now a lifeline frayed by the storm's ferocity. Jeb's hands were white-knuckled around the rigging, his eyes wide and unblinking as he fought to keep the flame alive.

          "Hold on!" he barked, a scream against an elemental force that was swallowing the sky whole.

          The waterspout tightened seemed intent on crushing us. The balloon's crimson skin stretched like a drumskin about to tear, and a cold spray of rain hammered the basket, turning the world into a blur of water and darkness.

          In that moment, my mind flitted back to the starfish I had imagined on the river's surface. I saw its five arms, each a delicate filament of life, now twisted into the vortex, each limb a strand in the chaotic tapestry of the storm. The sailboat I had conjured, a symbol of leisurely travel, was now a ghostly wreck, its mast snapped like a tooth of some great sea-beast. I felt a sickening sense of inevitability, as though the universe had conspired to strip away my fantasies and replace them with raw, unforgiving reality.

          The balloon lurched again, this time with a violent snap. The burner sputtered, the flame fighting a losing battle against the cascade that threatened to drown it. The whirlpool below seemed to pulse. I clung to the edge of the basket, my knuckles white, my lungs burning with the effort of inhaling the thin, damp air.

          "Waterspout!" I shouted, but my voice was swallowed by the roar of wind and water. The vortex's eye opened. In its center, the sky was a void, an absence of stars.

          Suddenly, a deafening crack tore through the air, the balloon's envelope gave way. A rush of warm air surged out, the flame sputtered and then died, and the basket plummeted in a chaotic tumble. Jeb's hand slipped from the rigging. The world became a blur of water, wind, and the sudden, terrifying realization of free fall.

          The descent was a nightmare in slow motion.

          The whirlpool roared beneath us, and the waterspout spiraled closer, its vortex drawing us like a moth to flame. I could see the river's surface, a black, churning mass, and I knew that the impact would be brutal.

          I grasped at the rope, my mind screaming for some miracle, some hand to pull me back into safety.

          And then--nothing. The basket hit the water with a sickening splash, the whirlpool collapsing around us. The impact threw me forward, and I felt the river envelop me, the water pulling me down. The last thing I saw before the darkness was the swirling waterspout, its column rising like a phantom finger pointing at the heavens, a reminder of the sky's cruel indifference.

          I came up gasping, lungs burning, the world around me a chaotic mixture of foam, rain, and the lingering scent of burning rubber. The balloon, once a vessel of dreams, now lay in tatters, its skin torn and flapping like a wounded animal.

          I had waited months for this flight, believing that the sky would grant me a moment of transcendent beauty. Instead, I learned that the heavens can be as arbitrary and merciless as the sea.

          I survived. The memory, the roar of the whirlpool, and the phantom sailboat forever haunt my thoughts, a dark echo that reminds me that sometimes, the most profound journeys end not with triumph, but with a plunge into the unknown.

Word Count: 995
Prompt: Write a story that takes place in the air of a hot air balloon while also using the following words, bolded, in your entry: starfish, sailboat, whirlpool, and waterspout.

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