Former Arabian horse-breeder, trainer & judge, Ag teacher, writer for HR&W. Co- wrote Horse Sci. Teaching man. for MSU & am a traumatic brain injury (TBI) SURVIVOR! (read Night-Mares & Day-Mares) Wanted: comments pointing to errors, make the story or wording better, or other thought provoking ideas. Member of Frontliners, Novel review, Stop the Abuse, SOAR and ROAK. I am plagued with a comma demon-- it either chucks in too many or too few. Any exorcists out there?