Hello! I'm a newbie writer whose debut novel, Original Sin is scheduled to be released Spring of 2011 by Wild Child Publishing. I've uploaded the first 3 chapters of Original and would greatly appreciate any feed back from authors, editors, literary agents and publishers. As I stated, I'm a newbie, and the chapters are unedited so, please be kind. I've been told my first Chapter has more 'tell' than 'show', however, since I am comparing instances in the chapter, I don't know how to do it any other way. Any help would be appreciated.