Hi. I'm a 13 year old who is just starting to test the waters of poetry and writing. These two poems I've just written in my portfolio are my first two I've ever written, so your reviews, suggestions, and ratings would be greatly appreciated. I mostly write poetry as of now, but I am also planning on writing a novel (of some sorts) in the not too distant future. Please rate and review my portfolio items, and I'll do my best to thank you.