Ode to the Sun Janaku |
Ode to the Sun Janaku sun sun rise I drink coffee watching the news gloom and doom sun provides light peace and joy sun comes up every damn day sun friendly light lights my soul sun our friend and our God sun shines bright need more sunblock sun bright red smoke in sky sun every day it shines now sun we worship like old days ~~~~~ My try: Just a day in Spring... count the pink blossoms you see or the birds stealing peanuts away light highlighting leaves in the tree where small birds find their food where children find shelter against sun where I enjoy every single second for nature in my back yard on a nice day in Spring. Source: http://forums.delphiforums.com/Writers_United/messages/?msg=214.1 ______________________________________________________________________ A form that I found by accident... the Jánakù. (pronounciation: hay (na) ku ) The forum owner of "The World in Chapter and Verse" writes: "The form was invented by Eileen Tabios. It is simple: A tercet comprised of one, two- and three-word lines. Variations can be created from the basic form. The form was Inaugurated on June 12, 2003 (Philippine Independence Day) The form became popular and now It is used by poets all over the world. " So... the explanation is very simple: a tercet comprised of one, two and three word lines. The example shown on the webpage is a poem written by Ernesto Priego...he wrote a book using this form. |