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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this and it describes me.

Keep writing
Dianne
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
How sad he did not go into the light. Many people wont go into the light. Sad. Good story.
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Review of A Taste of Honey  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Another good story. I was stung 22 times by bees at one time. I stay away!
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Review of The Balloon  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very good story, but sometimes it is very hard to let go, at any age. I do like your stories.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of 27 Years  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very good dedication to your grandparents
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I was never close to my grandparents either set. She has happy memory at least.
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Review of The Voice  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is great! Keeps you on the edge of your seat and then leaves you hanging. I love it.

Keep writing
Dianne
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for entry "A car flips..." 
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
The tax payers always pay for the government handouts.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was very interesting. Thanks for posting
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Review of Borrowed Time  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love unicorns! This story I'd great. Keep writing Dianne
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Review of ALLERGIES  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I know how you feel. Allegra helps me survive.
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Review of I Am Jellyfish  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I love this story! I hope you won that round. I love WDC tpo.
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Review of Only Human  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It does hurt sometimes to feel...but theres also love and joy to feel. I liked your poem.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a sad but good story. I would imagine many people can relate to it. I'm glad you won first place, the story deserved it. I did not see anything that needed correcting.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is a great story. I will never look at a tape measure the same way again!

Dianne
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Review of That Night  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A lovely story. I hope her dreams all come true.

Dianne
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Review of June Blog  
for entry "May 11,2024" 
Rated: E | (5.0)
I hope this helps.
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Review of Rough Draft (Duh)  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great poem. I don't critically review poetry, because I don't write it and don't know the forms for poetry. I always just say I like the poem and how it makes me feel. I understand the feeling of the poem. Reminds me of trying to write my short stories. Sometimes it just does not come.
Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A sad story, yet not sad. I enjoyed it very much. Kids can be extremely cruel. It is sad that it ended that way for Milton, but now he is whole and happy. I am sorry his mother will be the one to suffer now. Maybe she will be able to do something about bullying at the school.
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Review of Amen  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like this poem. I feel the same.

God Bless
Dianne
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hit me right between the eyes.
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Review of Hooked  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this story and the way it ended - a knight in shining armor. I hope they made it out safe and sound and had a happy life. I did not find any issues with grammar or anything that needed changing. I followed the story through and really enjoyed it.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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for entry "aroma of coffee" 
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I wish it tasted as good as it smells. Love your poem but I can't drink it anymore.
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Review of It's Complicated  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A lot of people pull away from God and then after a while come back to Him. God never leaves us - we leave Him. If we are His children - He will forgive us. We have to accept Him as our Saviour and ask Him to forgive our sins, if we are sincere, He will save our souls from Hell. He is my Saviour and He forgives me, He loves me. I try to live like He wants us to instead of what our carnal nature wants us to do.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed this poem. I can just see the zebras using their tails to paint the strips! I like the black and white, I guess it answers the question 'are zebras black with white strips or the other way round.' They are green and grey!

Keep Writing
Dianne
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