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The Death of Bippo with Dialogue
 Bippo: The Death of a Clown Open in new Window. (18+)
A clown's funeral
#2319369 by MoonChilde Author IconMail Icon


It was suggested that I add dialogue to this story. That way the reader could feel like they were observing what was going on instead of simply being told.

I fully agreed. So here it is.

Enjoy.

-Moonie
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