Erotic Language Class

A4 - intimacy

Evie dried herself off, which was better than the one in her apartment. Brenda had about twenty different options for showerheads, but Evie's favorite was the rainfall head in the ceiling. She dried off the inside of the glass door and nearly jumped out of her skin when she saw Brenda standing nude just outside of the shower. The surprise lasted seconds before Evie's appraisal of Brenda's body began.

Brenda's hair was just as crazy and untamed as usual, but Evie knew that her fingers wouldn't snag in it. That's where her hands wanted to be in the moment. The moment didn't last her fingers really ached to trace Brenda's athletic almost muscular body. She remembered the feel of Brenda's breasts beneath her fingertips and the heat that ran through her body when Brenda traced her fingertip over Evie's nipples.

"Sorry, I didn't mean to startle you! But I'm back! I hope that shower didn't cool your enthusiasm," Brenda apologized.

Evie dropped her towel and wished her body could show her enthusiasm as easily as a man's would. "I actually feel really relaxed and ready for a nice, slow dance."

Brenda smiled, "I know you just finished your shower, but I could use one. Do you think you could help me get clean?"

Evie caught the implications of the request. "I suppose if there are places you can't quite reach. Though you are the only person who has invited me to 'clean' them like that. It seems you are quite the dirty if your mood is what I sense it is."

"So now's who is the telepath?" Brenda's nipples were erect in the slight chill of the bathroom.

Evie realized that her nipples probably telegraphed her excitement as well. She stepped out of the way to let Brenda enter the shower with her. Brenda kicked the towel out of the shower and teleported two fresh dry ones to the dry corner of the shower enclosure. Then she closed the door lightly with just the slight click of the magnet engaging.

Brenda stepped over to the touch pad controlling the shower. She tapped the settings. The enclosure filled with the scent of wildflowers and rain. The rainhead sprinkled lightly to life with a cool but not cold drizzle and steam misted up the glass shower walls. Brenda turned back to Evie. She bent and firmly pressed her lips to Evie's. Evie's lips parted and she invited Brenda's tongue in with her own. They kissed for an impossibly long moment before Brenda pulled back. She stood her full height with her head tilted only slightly down to face Evie. Teased into it, Evie stood on her tiptoes and grabbed Brenda's head to pull her lips back down into range. Brenda chuckled and scooped Evie into her arms, lifting her easily to bring their lips to an even height. Evie chuckled back and began nibbling on Brenda's bottom lip. She suckled on it briefly while using her free hands to massage Brenda's breasts. Brenda moaned softly.

Brenda pulled Evie in tight and began breathing in her ear. Her warm breath tickled her ears, and the baby hairs around them sending a noticeable shiver of pleasure through Evie's body. Brenda lowered her to the floor. Evie bent forward and traced circles of moisture on Brenda's alert breasts. Her nipples hardened along with Brenda's as Evie suckled briefly on them. Brenda pressed into Evie with short gasps of pleasure.

Evie let her hands wander lower, grazing Brenda's taut stomach on their way to the treasure beneath it. Brenda backed into the wall sighing. Evie lightly teased Brenda's opening. Tickling more than satisfying Brenda's impulses. Brenda bent to kiss Evie again and whispered, "Yes." into her ear. Evie used one hand to tickle the sensitive opening and the other to reach in and explore Brenda's source of pleasure. Brenda's breath came in quick gasps and sighs. Evie worked her fingers intently imagining she was weaving pleasure through Brenda's body. The sounds Brenda made as a result stated quite clearly Evie's success. Brenda's opening tightened and her body began spasming. Evie continued with her manipulations of Brenda's opening and Brenda began to slide down the wall supporting her. Evie followed not willing to give up her mission. Brenda was beyond any kind of spacial awareness her hips gyrated in time with Evie's motions.

"Oh god, you can stop...no don't stop," Brenda moaned.

Evie didn't relent she continued her work as Brenda lost what little awareness outside of her body that remained. Finally satisfied with Brenda's satisfaction, Evie stroked Brenda's inner thighs and sat on the shower floor in front of Brenda.

Brenda panted back into composure, "Where in all of the omniverse did you learn to do that?"

Evie smiled mischievously, "I have the same equipment to practice on, and I have been practicing since puberty. I just imagined where and how it would feel good if you touched me and I just did that."

"Imagine if you were a telepath and you could feel your success flowering in my thoughts," Brenda sighed. "Now it's my turn to show you the benefits of being a mind reader."

Evie blushed and surrendered herself to Brenda's fervent caresses.

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Assignment #4
You choose which heat factor you are going for, and yes that includes being raunchy if you choose to do so. Instead of going for a full sex scene, concentrate on foreplay. This is all about the climb and getting close to the pinnacle but not going over that sweet threshold. Switch back to the second character's POV, and let us really get to know them better. What turns them on? What does it take for one partner to get the other hot and bothered and begging for intimacy? Remember to use the tools you’ve learned and incorporate them into this assignment. You have a maximum of 1500 words to work with. Which heat factor did you choose?
"Passionate"
"Sensual"