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Entries for the Micro Fiction Challenge 2022 and Drabble Activity 2024. |
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Short stories of 100 words exactly, written for the Micro Fiction Challenge, 2022, the Drabble Activity 2024, plus a few for my own benefit. |
| Every Breath You Take 1983. Jerry and his girlfriend, Stella, were talking music again. “I love that song by the Police, I’ll Be Watching You,” said Jerry. “You mean Every Breath You Take.” Stella paid attention to titles. “You sure? I thought it was I’ll Be Watching You.” “Evidently.” Stella was becoming used to these disagreements over titles. Jerry shrugged. “Okay, I know you’re always right. But the point is, do you like it? It’s so romantic.” “Yeah, pretty good. Not sure I’d want Sting to sing it to me though.” Jerry was quiet. He wasn’t sure he liked the idea of such competition. Word count: 100 First in a trio of related drabbles For Drabble Activity 2024, Week 8 Prompt: Write 3 drabbles related to one another, and yet each able to stand on their own. ––ooOoo—- I’ll Be Watching You 1993. Jerry and Stella, now married and relaxing in their apartment. The radio is playing softly in the background. Jerry reaches across and turns up the volume. “Hey listen, Stella. It’s that old song, I’ll Be Watching You.” Stella looks up from the book she’s reading. “It’s actually Every Breath You Take. But you’re right in a way - it should be called I’ll Be Watching You.” “Why?” “Well, it’s the words. They’re kinda creepy. It could be about stalking.” Jerry is quiet for a few moments, then, “Hmm, you might be right.” “You should know by now, I always am.” Word count: 100 Second in the trio For Drabble Activity 2024, Week 8 —-ooOoo—- Sting 2003 and Sting is being interviewed on the television. Both look to be in their fifties, although Sting is still tanned and fit. “So Sting, what about the controversial song?” “Which one is that?” Sting looks mildly interested. “Oh, you know, the one everyone thought was so romantic. And then somebody said it was creepy. Thought it was about a stalker.” “Ah, you mean Every Breath You Take.” Sting smiles wryly. “Yes, that’s it. So which is it, romantic or creepy?” “Think about it for a moment. The repeating words, ‘I’ll be watchin’ you.’ It was always about a stalker.” Word count: 100 Third in the trio For Drabble Activity, Week 8 —-ooOoo—- |
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