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Jul 10, 2011 at 10:50pm
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Please Take a Look at My Portfolio Items
I would appreciate if someone would review the two chapters I have on my Portfolio. On Chapter 1, I am mainly interested in plausibility and the reader's ability to suspend disbelief. Plus, I always want the writing to be clear and tight.

On Chapter 2, I am concerned that I made my aliens too "human." There are purposes to their appearance. Also, I wanted to make sure that reptilian/humanoid beings could exist in a climate that is very cold at night but mild during the day. There are other aspects, but those are the main ones.

Thanks in advance. The number for Chapter 1 is 1791081 and the number for Chapter 2 is 1791641.

Please feel free to add other comment, as well. Thanks in advance.

margot77us
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Please Take a Look at My Portfolio Items · 07-10-11 10:50pm
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Re: Please Take a Look at My Portfolio Items · 07-15-11 11:19pm
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Re: Please Take a Look at My Portfolio Items · 07-18-11 10:02am
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