To see more than what is seen
To know more than what is known
To have been deamed more than what is mean
To have to grow without a woe
To pretend not to know
To be the uncanny vision of the flaw
To stand above all
To look around and see nothing at all
To be lonely without the cryptic message you once imagined and called
I wish I could of saw
And never lost the flaw
Published October 23, 2012
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DeleteDarkenedCloud
Very recognizable, yet covered up in originality. Great!
DeleteLusekelo
wow.....perfect flow, perfect message...excellent
DeleteStevieTaite
Its brilliant to be different, and noticed as such! Your criptic message can be heard so listen again. listen to it and use it to recreate your perfect flaw.
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