Sorry about this late reply, For some reason I'm not getting notified when people post.
Before I start reading your first two chapters, I already have a few questions:
What is the state of the government after all this time? or is ALTO a black-market operation?
What is keeping Jonathan going?
What are the origins of the plague?
Why does Jonathan and his wife choose to be preserved?
What do people do with the memories and how does ALTO get them?
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