>> Would be cool to see a branch where Cindy is in on it
>> it would be fun to see the character developed more
>> I am curious to see how she develops,
These are statements about what a reader wants to read. The question is: If you were in Will's place, what would you DO? Presumably, Will wouldn't want to replace Cassie with a minion just to "see how she develops" as a character.
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