Hi Scifiwizard Retired
I took a peek at your assignment too, you have really put a lot of thought into this. I can imagine you are a bit like me, and have been researching setting concepts for ... possibly years!?
Something I wanted to say though, is the bit about his parents making him memorize the encyclopedia. That statement introduced disbelief into my mind, because, well isn't that actually impossible? If you removed that line it would lead (my mind anyhow) into the unfolding science tale better.
The following section applies to this forum item as a whole,
not this individual post.
Any feedback sent through it will go to the forum's
owner, Brandiwyn🎶.
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/forums/message_id/3591272
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.12 seconds at 8:57am on Nov 15, 2024 via server WEBX1.