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Oct 9, 2023 at 12:05am
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Re: Didn't Turn Out So Well...
Hallo, Shadow Prowler-Spreading Love Author IconMail Icon.

This is just a bare scene as one writes it in a short amount of time like the two days of contest. So don't worry about that. The basic conflict is strong: two brothers thinking their handicapped sister is an incapable (physical!) vegetable.

I honestly wanted to slap the two poopheads, and cheered for Sabrandra (dude, stumbled over that name.*Rolling*). A feisty gal, not letting herself down because of her challenges.*ThumbsUpL* You created quite an impressive character I easily rooted for.*ThumbsUpL*

Usually, I'm sensitive about mothers because my own was a poophead, too, but you don't talk bad about deceased people, sorry. I LOVED Valerie, and wished my Mom was a bit like her.*Heart* I think you might like my MMC, Vince's, Mum, Shona. She's a Scot, and a true Lady (her father's a Lord), but decided during her year abroad to stay in New York with Vince's Dad, Vincenzo, and to marry him and become a teacher, her secret dream.

If you like, in "~7~ How did you know, Dad? (Protagonist Background)Open in new Window. Vince's dad tells about how they met, and it helps Vince resolve a problem.
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