I did day 17 today. It was okay but the bit where I had to talk about law and order stuff kinda made me a little squeamish. Not only did this affect my protagonists it also gives Garry a motivation to escape the brig. He doesn't want to die. Yeah. Not really sure I needed to clarify that. Capital punishment has always kind of made my skin crawl. Maybe I'll go back and edit.
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