Sorry for late post here. I read it few weeks ago and then got distracted.
It's a very good story, and maybe a few things could be changed, more technical than anything. It did seem to get better as the chapters moved along. That's probably as you got a better handle with the AI. I didn't make any notes on specifics as if a review or I'd be more specific. There isn't anything "wrong," just things that I think could change or add some detail.
As for using AI, it sounds like you used them as "tools" and directed the creativity. There's nothing wrong with that since it's similar to having a team or ghost writers that do some work under a senior writer/editor. Great notes, too. Hopefully, people will become more acceptable for AI once they understand its usefulness when used correctly.
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