This choice: Ralph's journey inside Noel • Go Back... “it's really warm in here now” you complain “are we on the buss yet?”
“umm, no.. but it should be here at any moment now” Noel lied, he just wants to keep his friend in there a little longer, surely it couldn't hurt him this quickly.
A quite small boy appears, he's got blonde hair down to his shoulders and was quite short.
The boy stare wide eyed on your moving belly.
“soo, this is your spot? Why don't you sit down” Noel says
the boy sits down.
“wow, what have you eaten??” he asks.
“actually it is my friend, but I am going to let him out in a little while if he still wants to”
“Ooh, I see, that's so cool, I never seen such a huge belly before, umm.. c..could I pat it?”
“yea, sure, go for it”
The blonde boy puts his small hands on Noel's belly, it was even larger than the boy himself, the boy explored it's surface with his trembling fingers, he found a couple of spots were he could feel solid lumps of you that protruded against the stomach walls.
On the inside you had managed to overhear some of Noel's and the boy's conversation, you understood that he had lied to you about not being on the buss, this made you nervous, the acid had began to sting your bare feet and butt cheeks that were fully submerged in the increasing stomach acid, you taped the stomach walls trying to get Noel's attention.
“huh? Yes what is it?” Noel whispered with his head bent down to his belly.
“I'd really like to leave now”
“how much acid are in there?”
“it almost covers the entire floor of your stomach”
“I wouldn't worry yet, I bet you'll do just fine until we reach the camping site, besides there isn't really anywhere I could go to puke you up here, just hang in there”
The minutes and hours ticked past.
Noel woke up from the loud voice of the buss driver through the speakers.
“were about fifteen minutes from the camp, so wake up your sleeping friends and prepare to get off the buss”
Noel yawned groggily, he felt a finger poking his belly, it was the blonde boy,
“hey, wake up, by the way, shouldn't you let your friend out now, before your belly shrinks to much?”
Noel gets a lump in his throat and shakes his belly while whispering.
“Hey Ralph! You're okay in there?”
“n..no I..am not, I tried to speak to you, but you didn't ans-...Cough!”
“i am sorry dude, I fell asleep, how do you feel, are... are you still.. intact?”
“i am not sure, I haven't dared to touch my feet or butt for the last hour, I no longer feel my feet and a burning feeling comes from my butt”
“umm, I see” Noel ponders his options, if he were to puke his friend back out he would need emergency medical treatment and even surgery, and he himself would obviously get in a heap of trouble, and he would be hungry again...
“Ralph, I was thinking, there would just be a lot of trouble if I were to let you out in your current state.. I think it would be best for you to just stay where you are”
“NO NO NO! You promised to give me the choice to be let out, YOU PROMISED!”
Even though you yelled your lungs out it wasn't anyone that heard you except for Noel.
“Try to relax, I am sorry it went this far, but hey, you're still going on summer camp... just as.. you know.. my belly fat”   indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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