This choice: Yes, they were going to use the device on Jack • Go Back...Chapter #8A sweet present by: Tisch   Anticipating their cheekiness, Jack jumped at the two, trying to grab the device away from Izzy. Lucy stood in the way, blocking Jack and sending him backwards onto the floor. Jack grunted, and tried to get back up, but before he could, Izzy pointed the device at Jack and activated it.
*ZOOM*
Everything was dark. Jack was conscious, he, to some extent, understood what was going on, but had no idea where he was. Jack felt a little different, almost as if he wasn't as mobile as he was before. As he was trying to figure out what was going on, Jack heard muffled laughter. "Those two..." Jack seethed in his mind. "What the hell have they done?". It was all too soon when Jack found out. Light suddenly flooded his surroundings and Jack squinted. When he was able to open his eyes again, unsurprisingly, the first things he saw were the devious grins of his sisters, who were exceedingly large. Jack tried to yell at them, but nothing came out. Confused, Jack tried speaking out loud at a normal level, but once again, there was nothing. It was as if Jack was dreaming, and his voice was purely silent. Though he couldn't speak, his sisters sure could. "Wow!" Lucy remarked. "They all look so good, this is incredible!".
"They all look so good?' What does that mean?" Jack thought. He was fortunate that he could still hear his thoughts, since he couldn't speak. "Look, you can tell which piece Jack is, there's a little bump on either side of him," Izzy giggled and pointed. Her finger landed on Jack and nudged him around. "Stop it!" Jack thought. But no noise came out of him. "You're right! Damn, he looks good too, I could eat him up right on the spot. Can I?" Lucy looked to her sister. Jack couldn't believe what he was hearing. What was he? Why were his sisters so enticed with what he was? EAT him? Why would Lucy want to do that?
Izzy disappointingly shook her head. "I'd love to as well, he'd be just fine inside of us and he would live through our systems before coming out the other end. But remember, Mom has no idea about this, she would be the perfect person to give him to," she explained. Lucy nodded in understanding, and Jack was beginning to panic. He couldn't even think. Just then, there was a knock at the door and in came the kids' mom. Izzy quickly put something on top of the room Jack was in, sending him back into darkness. He stood still, unable to move and speak, only hearing the muffled voices of his family outside. Jack began getting accustomed to this environment and gradually picked up on some of the words coming out of the girls' mouths. "He had to leave... left you a present... wonderful!". Light came in again as the top Izzy put on the area came off. Jack saw his mom in utter surprise and delight.
"Oh my goodness! Jack got me these chocolates? They look so good, they have to be expensive! Oh, he's such a great child. I wish he hadn't had to go, I would have given him a massive hug," Carey sighed. Jack instantly became alert. That's what he was! Izzy and Lucy had turned him into a piece of chocolate a part of a box filled with them! Everything became chillingly clear to Jack. He likely was doomed. Because of the light coming in and less confusion in his mind, Jack peered around him and there they were. Dark chocolate, white chocolate, milk chocolate, various shapes, anything you could name from a typical box of chocolates was there. Including Jack. After looking around at the similar looking pieces of candy, Jack peered up at the three looking in. By the faces of all three, Jack could tell that his mom couldn't tell him apart from the other chocolates, but his sisters could. It was now in their hands to prevent their mother from inevitably eating him, but Jack knew that wasn't going to happen. He knew his sisters and how smart and tricky they were. He knew that he would be back to his physical human self at some point, but he didn't know when. It was all a matter of when his mom would eat him, when her body would undergo its processes and discard him, and when his sisters could get their hands back on him to return him to normal. But who knows when that would be.
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