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Rated: 18+ | (2.5)
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Hello, ruwth! Thank you for supporting this great activity!

*Checkb*Overall Impression:
We meet again on another fine Sunday for a great activity! I appreciate he amount of musical content you provided - 2 hours is a great playlist - I did the find substance of the Soundtrack era entry a bit light.

*Checkb*Title and Description
The title is to the point, and there's nothing wrong with that. You could expand it to give more context to the blog post to help the reader gauge what they're heading into.

*Checkb*Content and flow:
From what you posted, there are parts I think any reader would find intriguing and want to know more about, but as it is, it's a little light on details. This makes it really difficult to establish an emotional connection with your reader. In this case, specifically, I'd think readers would want to know how this playlist helped you during your morning get-ready sessions. If you listened to it regularly, did it help you in your job throughout the day? Did it ease the stress of what you dealt with? When you sang along, was it with great joy? Did you dance? Did you sing into your hairbrush? I know that may sound silly, but many of us have done our own little bathroom-mirror "concerts", and it's very charming and relatable. It can bring your reader in, get them interested in the music, and encourage them to move further into your blog. Even a quick tie-in story to a few specific songs could give the reader something to really grab on to.

*Checkb*Grammar and Mechanics:
I didn't find any problems.


*Checkb*Final Thoughts
I did check out the video, and I see why you enjoy these songs so much. Expanding on the post itself could give us more context and a connection to what's on the playlist.

Thank you for sharing your work with us!

JayNaNoOhNo Author Icon*Smile*

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