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Family
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1621228
Very short poem. Acknowledgement of selfishness.
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Created: November 24th, 2009 at 8:19
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Modified: March 3rd, 2023 at 4:22
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I call out to our mother
To take away our pain
I cry out to her
Telling those things
Things I could tell
Not to another
And remain still
The same
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