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I am not sure if it is just me, but with college, work, and life. I have no determination. Even for thing I like to do. This is a rough part of my life.
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I know this is a really old post, but college was a very hard time in my life too. I hope life is a little bit easier for you now.

I have a new item I just posted! Though I may be editing the description and keywords. "Child's Life in a Mine".

I am trying to describe something for a story that I am writing, so this is a test to see how well I did. Try to guess it. This feedback will help me greatly in my writing skills.

You walk into another room to see a covered thing. So, you uncover it to find a metallic colored car with all 4 wheels bent down. There are 2 big vents on the back along with some weird ribbons around the car. This car does not look like anything you have ever seen as well as the car was not even drivable. With one last look in the room and nothing useful it, so you left while thinking of how it would be to go back in time to change what happened.
Are we allowed to say out loud? Because I think you are describing the DeLorean from "Back to The Future"...but the ribbons on the car threw me off. I don't remember any ribbons on the car in the movie, but I'm almost sure that's what you just described.
It has some kind of striping that runs around certain parts of the car as it jumps through time. This is written in the POV of a 10-year-old.
who else is up this late on the East coast?
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Evidently, no one *Laugh*
Well I did take my ADHA meds to work on school work all night, so I kind did not expect that.
Hello?
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Hey.
Hallo, CostlessShip409 Author Icon -- how're you?
New additions to Snake Charm if anyone is interested.
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