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laminar3389

Oct 19, 2017 at 7:07pm

As an observation of your current thread's at endless beauty, it seems that of the choices made after Brad goes to the mall to meet Mary, the Ray gun is pushing him to create a harem. Considering the enhanced state of the subjects, at a certain point Brad will be passed from girl to girl. There also seems to be a side effect in that Brad is able to please his enhanced partner and he doesn't really complain about his refractory period. Thanks for your chain of chapters. Would you mind if I did add chapters onto some of the b choices?

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