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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very cute story in poetry form. I like the large font you used to make it easier to read, and of course the bold words set it off as well. Very eye-appealing. You've portrayed Halloween quite clearly, without using the word itself. The rhyme and flow made it roll off the tongue in a bouncy manner. Congratulations on your win, and it is well deserved!
As always, a pleasure reading your work!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A wonderful tribute to a mother's love. Good times and bad times, and even the sad times. A mother who loves no matter what. I liked how you repeated the last lines of the first two stanzas and then added the "I" in the third stanza. Who could imagine such heartbreak? Your love and devotion are evident in this poem. You've done an excellent job capturing the memories, both happy and sad. Well done in thought and execution of writing.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I'm reviewing your piece today.

*PenP* My initial thoughts:A wonderful tongue-in-cheek piece about the chilly weather. As a former northern Michigan native, I totally understand!

*PenB* My favorite part:The last two lines made me laugh out loud..."I could never leave Ohio ever, Because I'm frozen to the ground!"

*PenR* Some suggestions are:This is a free form poem. There really isn't a rhyme scheme. There were no typos or grammar issues with your writing. It works well though, with the humor infused into your poem.

*PenG* Overall:A humorous poem that only "northerners" can really understand. You really nailed it! I enjoyed it from beginning to end. I can't wait to read more of your work.

Thank you for sharing your work, and Keep on Writing!

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Review of Lovers  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I'm reviewing your piece today.

*PenP* My initial thoughts: This is a short poem, but it does pack quite the punch!

*PenB* My favorite part:Was the buildup of passion and love in the voice of the narrator.

*PenR* Some suggestions are:I found no grammar issues or typos with your work. Well done!

*PenG* Overall:It's amazing that people are so stuck on the "package" rather than the actual gift itself. You tackle a tough subject, and one that I am sure can be quite painful with panache. I enjoyed reading your poem, and I feel sympathy for the narrator. I only hope one day, the "package" won't matter, if there is love to be had.

Thank you for sharing your work, and Keep on Writing!

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Review of Your Person  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I'm reviewing your piece today.

*PenP* My initial thoughts:I can sense the frustration that your writing brings out. Those that are not happy with themselves often reflect their unhappiness unto others they consider "different". But I also see encouragement for individuals to remain true to themselves, regardless of what others think. Who gets to decide what is normal, anyway?

*PenB* My favorite part:The last stanza: being "weird","strange", or "odd" is a choice, and you applaud those differences.

*PenR* Some suggestions are:I spotted no typos or grammatical issues in your writing. It was well thought out and executed.

*PenG* Overall:I applaud you for the subject matter, and for writing from your heart. I enjoyed reading your poem from beginning to end, and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Thank you for sharing your work, and Keep on Writing!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I'm reviewing your piece today.

*PenP* My initial thoughts:It is a dark piece of poetry. A glorious being at first, now transformed into an unimaginable creature.

*PenB* My favorite part:Where he cries out, but his cries fall on deaf ears.

*PenR* Some suggestions are:I found nothing to suggest. No grammar issues or typos here in your writing! It was well executed.

*PenG* Overall:You give vivid imagery of the transformation from Light to Dark. I could clearly picture the change as I read your work. It gave me goose bumps to think of such a transformation. You've done an excellent job here.

Thank you for sharing your work, and Keep on Writing!

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#1949660 by ~ Santa Sisco ~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Thank you for sharing.

*PenR* My first impression:I am excited that you have tried to spread your wings and write in a different genre. Nothing like getting out of our "comfort zone", huh?

*Penr* How I feel about this:I was intrigued from the beginning. I like how she prefers a shortened name to her "given" name. The change of scenes was smooth, and well thought out. The tension building was done quite well.

*PenR* Some suggestions I have: "and grand thief" - perhaps "and grand theft"?

"the worse storm" - perhaps "the worst storm"? Other than that, I didn't see any other grammar issues.

*PenR* Overall:I didn't want to quit reading this story. I do hope that there will be a part two soon! LOL. You've ventured into new territory with great success, I believe. Great Job!


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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Welcome to Writing.Com! I hope you make yourself at home, and enjoy all that WdC has to offer. The people here are a friendly bunch of folks, and don't be afraid to jump right in or ask questions!

I'm reviewing your piece today.

*PenP* My initial thoughts:An interesting take on the life of a "PK". I liked how you introduced the family, and what the "mold" was supposed to be like. I also liked that you tried to be your own person, whether it was trying to be "perfect" or a perfect "smart ass".

*PenB* My favorite part: The way you took it all in with a humorous tone. It could have driven you crazy, or it could have driven to the extreme opposite of the way you were brought up.

*PenR* Some suggestions are:I found nothing to add to your story. The grammar was excellently executed and there were no typos that I spotted.

*PenG* Overall:An engrossing story. You have a knack for taking "everyday life" and making it an enjoyable read. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your work, and Keep on Writing!

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Review of Life's Lessons  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I'm reviewing your piece today.

*PenP* My initial thoughts:An interesting take on Life Lessons, told from the point of view of the "Lesson".

*PenB* My favorite part:Where the "Lesson" is explaining that sometimes it may hurt, but if it didn't, the person wouldn't be prepared for when it was really painful. The other thing I liked was that the "Lesson" not only stayed with the one person, but also went off to "teach" others as well.

*PenR* Some suggestions are:I spotted no grammar or typo issues in your writing. I really don't have anything to suggest, other than to keep writing and learning to "voice" your pieces as you have done here.

*PenG* Overall:A unique point of view for this free form style poem. I enjoyed reading it from beginning to end.

Thank you for sharing your work, and Keep on Writing!

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Review of Restoration  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Welcome to Writing.Com! I hope you make yourself at home, and enjoy all that WdC has to offer. The people here are a friendly bunch of folks, and don't be afraid to jump right in or ask questions!

I'm reviewing your piece today.

*PenP* My initial thoughts:A very engrossing tale. Lovers separated and then reunited told in a unique format. I loved the story with a bit of a Native American twist.

*PenB* My favorite part:The shaman's chanting and then calling out "Forgive!" You totally had my attention with this part.

*PenR* Some suggestions are:I spotted no grammar or typo issues in your writing. It was well thought out and executed. I would only wish that it was longer, but that is what happens with flash fiction.

*PenG* Overall:A riveting tale. The story had me entranced from beginning to end. I really didn't want the story to end!

Thank you for sharing your work, and Keep on Writing!

sincerely,
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Thank you for sharing your site! You have made it a wonderful place to not only visit once, but to keep coming back. I enjoyed reading your biography at the head of the page. You definitely have a knack for poetry, and I like that you are working to expand your interest in the different styles of poem writing. Your graphics are simple, but beautiful. I also enjoyed reading your poem of what being a Christian means to you. I like the humble attitude you take in the poem.
The rhyme and flow of the poem makes it easy to read and understand. You make it feel honest and real. I see that you have a link to where you store your poetry, and also a link to a guest book. These are nice additions to your page. Happy 6th Anniversary at WdC, by the way!

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
KiyaSama has done a beautiful job with this site! I loved the graphics, and there are so many quotes and poems and stories here! I can tell this site has been done with love and honor for the Earth. It is hard to imagine anyone wanting to abuse the planet after seeing this site and looking at the links provided.
A wonderful job! The site just pulls you in. Some of the poems are heart-wrenching. Some just are a celebration of this blue orb that we call home. It doesn't matter the faith of the person who has written, it just matters that they care enough to contribute and to be a constructive part of our community! We are all members of the global community - we just have to decide what we will do with it. Some do nothing, but this site shows that a lot of people are doing something!

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Wow, this is an amazing site! You have something for everyone! Welcoming newbies, encouraging others, and just random acts of kindness...guess I see where the ROAK comes from!

This page is set up so that it is easy to traverse, and I only saw one link that is "Not Valid" on the page. I am assuming that link is no longer available.

The affiliates are amazing as well. You've done a great job here!

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
An interesting contest. One that requires a bit of thought and preparation. The page has been formatted well, and the rules are easy to read and understand. I would be interested in scoping out this contest come 2016, when the next round takes place.

I appreciate you sharing your imagination and creativity in this format. Good luck with it in the future, and success in your endeavors.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Thank you for sharing.

*PenR* My first impression:Disappointment was definitely the reaction, and very appropriate. A sad story to be sure.

*Penr* How I feel about this:I would have added angry, disgust, betrayal, and disbelief to the disappointment. The images of worry and anger going back and forth in Erin's mind are vivid. I can understand this feeling of being stood up. It can be one of the hazards of being single.

*PenR* Some suggestions I have: I really didn't spot any typos or grammar issues. It is like an internal monologue along side with the narrator's voice.

*PenR* Overall:Well written. The images you've created with your writing flow smoothly from beginning to end. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for sharing.

*PenR* My first impression: That pesky thing, choice! How it makes you squirm and hesitate over everything. A definite reminder on how choices make and mold us in all that we do or have done.

*Penr* How I feel about this: I agree with your views regarding choice: it can hang you up, or you can just decide and get on with living. I have definitely been there, done that. And since I am still living, LOL, I am still doing so every day.

*PenR* Some suggestions I have: I have no suggestions on how to improve this. The centering, as always with your poetry is eye appealing, and helps make the words flow smoothly like a waterfall. I spotted no typos or grammar issues in your writing.

*PenR* Overall: As always, you give your readers something to think about. Thank you for doing so. I enjoyed reading your work. Again, as always, great job!


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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
A very scary idea, indeed! The description of the scenes you wrote about brought chill bumps to me while reading it. I did, however, have to grimace a little bit at the final scene where the hen-pecked husband went to go get his camera. It doesn't take a genius to guess what will happen to the wife *Shock2* .

I saw no grammar issues or typos in your writing. The flow was smooth, and the story was easy to read. Quite a thriller! Well done.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
LOL...what an intriguing tale. Very imaginative and a fun read. The picture you've added to the page just jumps out and grabs you. I'm not sure whether to be sad that you've lost your car, or to laugh at how it's been taken over and painted by a Scottish squatter!

Oh, well I guess back to the drawing board, as you walked away with "no car".

I spotted no grammar issues or typos in your writing. I'm glad you are "back"! I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Great Job!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for sharing your poem. I like the style of it and how you've centered your words. I also like the footnote at the end of your poem to explain the "Flower". Thank you for that. An anguished cry as the ship is not going to a safe harbor, but to run aground. A clear lament in poetry style. I agree it has a bit of Shakespearean feel to the poetry.

I saw no typos or grammar issues to distract from the reading of your work. It was well thought out and executed. Good luck with the contest entry. I enjoyed reading it very much.

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Review of Don't Run Aground  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
An encouraging poem. I like the comparisons of saving hands on a ship and saving a relationship and that of allowing children to grow up without the hate and prejudices that adults can poison their minds with.

I could picture each example that you give clearly, and your poem was easy to read and understand. My favorite line is the last one: Look Explore Be Free. I felt that it fit each circumstance that you described in your poem. Well done! I spotted no typos or grammar issues that would detract from your message. Thank you for sharing!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Vivid imagery of a rusting hulk of a ship laying on its side. I like the descriptions you give in your poem. The imagery of death is all about. Even the inevitability of death is resounded in the ending of your poem. "We are all but living dinosaurs". Perhaps one day someone will find our skeletons and wonder what we were like? Just as those who wonder what the rusting hulk of a ship was like in it's heyday.

Interesting questions to ponder. I spotted no typos or grammar issues with your writing. I like the way you've centered your poem to give spotlight to the words. Well done!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading your posts to date. You have an easy flowing style that I can relate to. I appreciate different points of view, and your willingness to share. I also appreciate the encouragement you have given me in the short time of our writing acquaintance. Keep up the great work! You are an excellent cheerleader *Smile*

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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a wonderful contest forum. I love the graphics on it, and it does feel warm and cozy. This is my first stop here, and I definitely plan on being back.

I like how the different sections are formatted and easy to find. I saw nothing to detract from the page, and the flow is smooth. You've even formatted a "handbook" for easy access. Rules, images, conversations...even "goodies" are provided. It is just like a real coffee house. I am surprised that it wasn't thought of sooner. You've done an outstanding job with this forum, and it looks to be a pretty popular place to hang out. I plan on checking things out here as well, as I'm always looking for things to do.

Thank you for sharing this with everyone. I hope it continues to be a popular place for coffee.

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Review of The Dialogue 500  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
An interesting way to tell a story. The rules are clear and easily understandable. It seems to be a pretty popular contest.
I saw no typos or grammar issues, and it's funny how you said to "write like people talk" and not to worry about punctuation.
I have entered this contest before, and have enjoyed the prompts that you have given.
I hope this continues to stay a WdC favorite.

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Review of Gathering Storm  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Thank you for sharing this poem. The title caught my eye. I enjoyed reading this vivid portrayal of a storm brewing and then letting loose. It was visually appealing as well. I could see the scene clearly in my mind as I read the poem. The ending also was gripping, with the "tips" of the water drops and the resounding CRASH at the end. Well thought out and written.
I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

sincerely,
amy

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