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Review of My Angel  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
i was so sad when i got done reading this. it made me tear up a little. i can totally relate to this and so ca so many others Good job!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
i really like this and how this can relate to so many people on so many levels.
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Review of Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
i like your word choices and how i can relate to this.
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Review of Revenge so sweet  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
i like how you compared her thoughts to a twisting tornado. this is really good1
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is very good, i love the word choice and how i can fee lthe emotion. i can relate to this.
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Review of Love Despised  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
oh I love love this!! i can so relate and i just love it! Good Job!
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Rated: E | (2.5)
I really like this .i can really relate.
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Review of Remember When  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really like this, especially the ending. I feel that it would have flowed better if you had left out the "toy" in the 6th line. Good Job!
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Review of Life of Teenager  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This is so true and I enjoyed reading this! Good Job!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I like this, especially how you ended it!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I really really like this. You did excellent!
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Review of Love Like That  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is really really great! I like how you put tons of emotion and thought into this poem! Good Job!!
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Review of Who Am I?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really like your poem! It has tons and tons of good meaning! I can really relate to it! Good Job!!
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Review of Sweater Weather  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I love your poem! Now I want a blanket!! Good Job!!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like your poem! you put tons of imagery into it! Good Job!
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Review of Truth  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like your poem, you put a lot of thought and emotion into it. Good Job!
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Review of Running  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I love your poem! I can relate!
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Review of They Try  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It was a little confusing to me at first but very good poem.
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Review of Running  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I love this poem it is very well thought and put together! Good Job!!!
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Review of Good VS. Evil  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this poem, you really thought about what you were writing and put emotion behind it.
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Review of What is left?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really like this poem, it was very well thought with a lot of emotion put behind it.
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Review of Passion  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like the poem, i just wish you wouldn't have used "It" at the beginning of every line. iI feel like it would make it more interesting if you didn't.
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Review of Not Yours To Take  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this poem so much it is very well written. I love how you put emotion and thought behind this. It is really heart touching and very easy to relate to.
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Review of Alone  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I like this poem, but instead of saying "and" in between lost, comfused. and scared, I would have just put them on seperate lines to make it more interesting to the reader.
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Review of Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this poem, it was well thought. Good Job!
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