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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Story :
Loved the story, a mother's view of arranging a party and baking a cake for her daughter. Beautifully described.


Characters : The mother and toddler descriptions are totally relatable.

Suggestions : None,it's well written.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi

That is a very nice poem on consciousness.
A topic that probably needs a lot more study on . I like how you bring out that even if we are replicated, which probably will happen sometime in future,it will still not be same as us.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Story : An interesting tale of a couple navigating their day in a riot hit city.A state of confusion of why people get into such senseless violence is clearly brought out.

Characters : The characters are relatable and make the reading a lot more easier .

Suggestions : The end seemed a little incomplete guess that can be worked on a little.
It would make it more fun to read if the scenes are described rather then just informing the reader.Like Once she finished her shower and got dressed...
It could involve describing what she wore and got out of the shower which would show both the points to the reader that her shower is done she got dressed too.Again they are just my suggestions, need not be the best way to do it .

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi

That is a very interesting item.All of us are running in the hope that we are headed towards a better future, forgetting the moment to live and love is now, before it becomes just a memory.
Your writing style is nice, it does keep the reader interested and has a nice flow.

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bas


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Review of HAPPINESS  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi

That is a beautiful item.In the world today where everyone seems to be stressed, everyone is running behind an illusion of happiness, it's so important to realise that true happiness does not come because of something,it comes when we accept things as they are and believe he has a reason for it.
Small correction, the word and has been misspelt in "adventure anf meaning".

Thanks for sharing this wonderful item

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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Story : A short story about a warrior wanting to be the greatest.

Characters : The only charcter is described well, but I feel a little description about his looks would have made him more effective.

Suggestions : The story seems incomplete at the end, who is the next fighter, what will happen. If you do decide to extend it , would be glad to read.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Story ::
A heart warming story of a family dealing with an elder suffering from dementia. The emotions have been portrayed really well and keeps the reader engaged through out the story.

Likes : The touch of positive at the end , allowing the family few more happy moments was a nice touch.

Suggestions : No suggestions.




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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I am reviewing this as part of the I write Decade Edition
Poem : A redacted recreation of a poem on the life in city and how everyone of us is running behind something, forgetting to live and enjoy life. Even though the poem is redacted quite a lot, the new version has surely caught all the important points and messages that the original one conveyed so that surely is a great job.



Likes : To be frank I had no idea about redacted poems until i read this, and sure did find the concept very intriguing.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Poem : A poem about a new shoe for the doggy to help her run and walk and enjoy herself out in the open. The poem brings out the character of Lucy really well, justifying the need for a the doggy shoe perfectly.

Likes : Liked the last line about Lucy telling her friends about the shoe, kind of closes the poem well with Lucy back in the park walking and meeting other dogs out in open.

Suggestions :
I am not really sure if this is a typo or I am reading it wrong, but I feel

Her foot just couldn’t past the test.

The word past might be pass ?


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Review of Kitty  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Story : An interesting tale, probably with a little bit of a moral in it. Don't take ride from strangers and drunk people.It is well written,though the beginning leaves readers a little bit confused as to who is kitty.

Likes : The ending was well presented.

Suggestions : No suggestions, other than that it can be made into a full length horror story

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Story :A suspense thriller about a serial killer on loose in a small town. The narration is really good , keeping the reader gripped all through till the end. The descriptive details of the weather and the surroundings adds to the effect of suspense in the story.

Likes : The setting chosen for the story was really good , storm ravaged town already in darkness.

Suggestions :No suggestions, but if you do decide to write a sequel to this do let me know.
, would love to read it.

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Review of His Song  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Story :Story of young love, filled with internal conflicts and beautiful emotions that make love such a wonderful feeling. The characters are described really well and easily relatable .

Likes : The journey from hate to love has been described really well and keeps the reader interested at all times.

Suggestions : No suggestions.

Have you written the rest of story? Sure it will be a good one to read.
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Review of First Day  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Story : A story of first day at a new work . It's written well with setting up of the narrator doubting his abilities and hoping that he will be able to carry out this job successfully.

likes : The description of lawn mowing was put across in a funny way.

Suggestions :No suggestions.

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Review of Earl's Sandwich  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Story :A sandwich's autobiography, that was a really creative story . The description and the details surely makes the reader feel for the sandwich, hoping it survives the eating assault.

Likes : The way the movement of internals of the sandwhich is described is really funny.

Suggestions : No suggestions



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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Story : That is a really funny story, that too based in a real event. It's Not surpsising though that young kids saw something on BBC , they would assume it to be true. It's written really well, describing the details enough to give the reader a really good picture.


I just wonder can a TV channel today pull such a hoax and get away with it... there would be such a hue and cry on social media about it.

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Review of Turning Thirty  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Story : A very interesting tale of love of youth turning into a bad decision. The blindness of love in youth can lead tk so many wrong paths , which as mentioned in the story only hits us when we get older and thirty is surely one such age when realizaion of a lot thigs dawns on us.

Likes : The ending was really creative and unexpected, very well done.

Suggestions : No suggestions.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Story : That is a really hilarious story , with Jeeves in Hogwarts. Both the characters have been presented exactly as they would behave and the story is entertaining right till the end.

Likes : The idea of using robot houseflies sure was a creative thought.

Suggestions : No suggestions.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Story : That is a really funny tale of a fight for possession. The funny ending really makes one wonder did he really win the case or it just appeared as if he won it .The story also keeps the suspense on till the end, which makes it a very good read.

Likes : The ending is really unexpected and well written.

Suggestions : No suggestions.

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Review of Life Eternal  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Story :A very interesting story about a choice being offered, to choose between life and death, but everything comes at a price which Brad failed to realize in time. The story is very well written and keeps the surprise hidden till the end .

Characters :Liked the way face of life was described,as if it had taken Brad's persona.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Story : A description of the authors belief in God and his support to her at all times she needed it. In a period that has tested every one in someway or other, having a strong belief in someone , having the faith that you will be taken care of no matter what is so essential and I belive that is some thing that the generetaion today is starting to miss. The names might be different across the globe ,but everyone needs an anchor.

Suggestion: In the last line ->
can rest assured my anchor will

I think "be" is missing.


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Story : That is a wonderful story detailing the search for the perfect coffee. The story builds really well before the hilarious truth of the coffee is revealed.

Likes : The way the owner makes sure that the customer buys the coffee was nice, the perfect way of marketting.


Guess we should be careful before we ask for recepies of exotic dishes *Laugh*

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Poem: A poem about the legend of a dragon and how they get formed . The poem flows well as a story and the words have been weaved well into the poem.

Likes : The ending is nice with ,dragons coming aid of downtrodden.

Suggestions : No suggestions.

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Review of Completion  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Story :A story about an attempt to turn herself into a witch.The description makes the reader feel her desperation, making it a good read.

Characters : The surprise ending is nice, making the reader to want her to succeed.

Suggestions :
Just a typo who had seased -> who had ceased .

Do you plan to write a longer version of it ?

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Story : A tale of a brothers participating in a boat race . The description of the race is vivid and makes the reader get involved in it.

Likes : The ending was good, making the race seem like a family tradition.

Suggestions :May be if word limit allows, a little history about dad also being a racer could be added...just a thought.

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Story : A horror story that unfolds in a scary desolate mansion . The detail description of the mansion adds well to the horror scene. Though it felt the ending left a lot to the readers imagination.

Likes : The falling book was a good attempt at distracting the reader before introducing the new character.

Suggestions : May be the story can be expanded after removing the word limit needed for the contest.

Thanks for sharing the item, enjoyed reading it.

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