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Review by Reba Smith Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Argus,
Overall Impression; AWESOME!
You have some very good ideas here.
Title; A good title that is suitable to the subjectof your piece.
Grammar / Punctuations; I could find no errors.
Flow; The flow is good and form is okay.
Words Choice; Words selection is good and makes for easy reading.
Tone; Good depth of feeling.
Final thoughts; EXCELLENT PIECE!
Thanks for sharing and it's my honor to review your great piece.

WRITE ON!!!
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Review by Reba Smith Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Ohayou gozaimasu ( Good morning) Argus,
I'm a japanene-american heritage, but I'm also political genuis like you. In my knowledge, after Obama's election in 2008, I was one of those who believed that we were at the turning point...that the Reagan tide was receding, and we would see a cycle of progressive politics for 15 or 20 years.To have that reversed so quickly is stunning . This is the first time since the Truman-Eisenhower years that we've had three elections in a row in which more than 20 House seats have changed hands. We may be moving away from political cycles and into a period of extreme volatility in our politics, just as we have extreme volatility in our markets.
Overall impressions: Your piece is Awesome and Outstanding!!!
Your writing is so much mean to my great politics views!!!!
You have a great '' BRILLIANT MIND!!!''
fINAL THOUGHTS; Great Job!!!
WRITE MORE ABOUT POLITICAL VALUES LIKE THIS ONE!!!
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Review by Reba Smith Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
hi Magoo,
this poetry is impressively AWESOME!
Title fits the content.
Imagery ; Good and vivid.The author captures the readers heart, due to the word's choices is captivating thoughts indeed, it seems the life story of myself. The character of the poem is myself it similar to my lovelife.,. ''SUPERB, EXCELLENT piece!!!
Tone; Good depth of feelings. Wisdom is felt here.
Rhyme; nice reflections.
Flow; Flow is good. The words choices is great and meaningful.
Overall; Outstanding!!!! Excellent read.Please keep sharing.
Final thoughts; Great job.
WRITE ON!!!!

Reba Sarona ( cherry012/ lovingly)
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Review by Reba Smith Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Zodiac sign is only for entertaining people, but if a person's GOD's believers or a Servant of GOD, don't really believe on this piece of CRAP like this, not a good Christian only but a BUDDHIST or a non- GOD BELIEVERS. Also, if you believe in the '' HOLY BIBLE,'' you definitely will not buy or agree with this crappy things like this. Do you think is this GOD's creation? Absolutely not, this is a man-made/ man's idea.
Final thoughts; Good...but next time more good than this!



WRITE MORE GOOD THAN THIS ONE....WRITE ON!!!
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Review by Reba Smith Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
hi Eva this is AWESOME short romance story, i love to read it again and again. the concept of this story is very sentimental, but it's true to life story.And also very meaningful, the female character is a great woman, who can't easily forget her romantic affair to the man she love. Very good love story but so short.

FINAL THOUGHTS; GREAT JOB.

WRITE MORE.


Rebecca
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Review of Paper World.  Open in new Window.
Review by Reba Smith Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Khaki...my overall impression to your poem is AWESOME! My only concerns would be hat the verb is passive and word is very meaningful.In your poem your concept is my favorite one, is all about my one and only love of my life is '' GOD.'' Yes, only GOD is the only true relation of the world.By means of our prayers, we talk to GOD,we tell HIM our problems, sorrows,and sufferings in life. With FAITH, strong FAITH, most of the time our prayer was been answer.
Theme and Meaning; this is clear and well done!

The poem is already good, and it could be EXCELLENT!!!


Best of luck, and Write more on!!!

Rebecca
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Review by Reba Smith Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
konnichiwa Babalu,( hello Babalu) AWESOMELY impressive.This is a different poem,very interesting one.
Title; The title is an interesting one that will draw readers in.
I can appreciated the elements used and the imagery was greatly in creativity.I also enjoyed your efforts to make this poetry intellectually more appealing to the readers. GREAT POEM!!!
Conveys an important social messages. I love the flow,the rhyme.characters development and the moral at the end.
Grammar; Perfectly well-written.
Final thoughts; Job Well Done!
MAY GOD BLESS YOU AND YOUR GREAT WORKS!!!
KEEP WRITE ON!!!
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Review by Reba Smith Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
hi C.E.Thieroff...EXCELENTLY impressive!
Personal thoughts; This poem has a great premise, and a very unique one.However,I THINK THAT WITH SOFTENING the language a little to make your meaning better understood and better flowing really help this poem to live up to its full potential.
Title; A heartfelt plea. Skillfully crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoyed!
Flow/ rhythm; Flow is good as is the rhyme scheme.Every second/ fourth line in each stanza is perfect masculine and line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece.
General Disclaimer; This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful!!!
Final Thoughts; GREAT JOB!!!
MAY GOD BLESSES YOU AND ALL YOUR GREAT PIECE OF WRITES!!!
Write On!!!
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Review by Reba Smith Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
hi BScholl...EXCELLENT impression,nice reflection of a great mystery story. I enjoyed the central protagonist's unabashed materialism.I also enjoyed your efforts to make this writing intellectually more appealing to the readers.
Conveys an important social messages. I love the flow,the syntax, charactes development and the moral at the end.
Spelling/ Grammar; well-written.
Final thoughts; GREAT STORY!!!
MAY GOD BLESSES YOU AND ALL YOUR GREAT WRITES!

Write On!!!
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Review by Reba Smith Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Lee Thomas...EXCELLENT impression,nice reflection and great adventure story that ever been told! This is a different adventure story than what I am used to.It has some sense of emotions but it's not as easy for me to connect with due to the nature of the topic.That's not something you have to be connected with,however,because there are plenty of readers that are meant to be the audience for this type of adventure story even if I'm not on of them.I can appreciate the elements used to create images and the personal discussion of the poem.
All of the edits suggested in this reviews are my opinion.It's a decent stry but there are some minor,technical issues through out to consider.
The formation,grammar is perfectly written.

Title; The Title is an interesting one that will draw readers in!!!
The Spelling is well-written!

My Final Thoughts; GREAT JOB!!!
MAY GOD BLESSES YOU AND ALL YOUR GREAT WRITINGS,AND THE MORE WRITE'S TO COME !!!
I'm looking forward to your next great adventure story,i really enjoy my reading,and I DO LOVE YOUR PIECE OF WRITES!

Write On!!!
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Review by Reba Smith Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi penpen,
This is a different writes than what I am used to. It has some sense of emotions but it's not as easy for me to connect with due to the nature of the topic.That's not something you have to be connected with,however,because there are plenty of readers that are meant to be the audience for this type of thesis.I can appreciated the elements used to create images and the personal discussion of the story.All of the edits suggested in this reviews are my opinion.It's pretty decent story but there are some minor,technical issues through out to consider.
In your last paragraph of your thesis,we really would turn to GOD for guidance and direction in our lives,YES,ABSOLUTELY,but some other people they really are living their life with GOD,because I did myself to live a life with GOD's always with me!
Final thoughts; GREAT JOB!!!
MAY GOD BLESS YOU AND YOUR GREAT WRITES!!!

WRITE ON MORE,PLEASE!!!
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Review by Reba Smith Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi...her_majesty,Excellent impressio,nice reflection.I love the poem,very meaning and have impact to our situation to our ''GLOBAL WARNING.'' Have a good rhyme too. A very good piece of poem.Awesome!!!
MAY GOD BLESS YOU,AND ALL YOUR GREAT PIECE OF WRITE.
WRITE ON !!!
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Review of And You Did  Open in new Window.
Review by Reba Smith Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
hey Poppy good morning...Excellent impression,nice reflection.great concept,great poem.How you doing? Please kindly visit my port one of this day,ok? Happy Easter Week,in advance!!! Not see you for a while,hoping everything about you goes well,with the blessing of our LORD JESUS! MAY GOD BLESSES YOU AND YOUR FAMILY! GOOD POEM!
WRITE ON!!!
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Review by Reba Smith Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
hi angel maiko...Excellently impressive.VERY GREAT IDEA WITH PUTTING POLL QUESTION ON THIS SCI-FI STORY.YOU'RE BRIGHT IDEA WORK AGAIN.GREAT JOB!!!
MAY GOD BLESS YOU ALWAYS!!!
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Review of Two Wise Women  Open in new Window.
Review by Reba Smith Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
hi Prof.Moriarty...It's a girl,Excellent impression,very interesting and quite an imagination,love it.Your use of adjectives to feelings and the depth you want to describe the main plot of very emotional short story,it's content gives the readers a vivid idea like you are there.
Characters; The characters were well-written.I understood who they were without having the author pound them into my head.Well done!
I like the lenght.The story was told but not overloaded with events that really didn't matter.
You do such a great job!!! MAY GOD BLESSES YOU,AND YOUR GREAT WRITINGS! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!
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Review by Reba Smith Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
hi Dutch 91,e
First Impression; What an OUTSTANDING Fantasy story,especially ' 'The Neclace's Curse.'' I love the whole entire story about it.The story works in a strange, unfathomable ways! Great Job!
Referencing; All is consistent,as far as I could tell.So,this is very well-writen .The messages or the plot of the main story is clear and timely.The languages choices are striking and create some strong images.I was even more impress with this clever piece.It's shows that you must have taken some good quality time to make the fantasy story not only match the form but to make sense also.
BRAVO on grasping this fantasy story form.And you've done a very great job with this one!!!
MAY GOD BLESS YOU,AND ALL YOUR GREAT STORY! WRITE ON!!!
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Review by Reba Smith Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
hello...I_chatten,EXCELLENT IMPRESSION,nice reflection.The languages choices are striking and create some strong images.I was even more impress with this clever piece of fantasy.It's shows that you must have taken some good quality time to make the poem not only match the form but to make snse also.BRAVO on grasping this poetry for and you've a very great job like with this one!
Referencing; All is consistent, as far as I could tell.So, this is very well-written.The messages or the plot of the main story is clear and timely.It's my great pleasure to read your fantasy story,i love readig it!
MAY GOD BLESS YOU,AND ALL YOUR GREAT WRITES,WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!
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Review by Reba Smith Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
hi sweet Poppy...AWESOMELY pretty funny.The syntax is well-formatted,nice words pattern along with good verses.EXCELLENT impression,nice reflection.The languages choices are striking and create some strong images.I was even more impress with the clever piece.MAY GOD BLESS YOU ALWAYS AND ALL YOUR CREATION,WRITE MORE PLEASE!!! Sweet poppy dear please check my 2 comedy piece of writes,if you don't mind please,sweet dear buddy,
mate ni,shonen daniels
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Review by Reba Smith Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Konnichiwa Tim...This totally EXCELLENT poem you've been creating.Nice Rhyme,great reflection of your very creativity thoughts.Great rhyme pattern along with good verses.The languages choices are striking and creates some strong images.I was even more impress with the clever piece! It shows that you must have taken some good quality time to make the poem not only match the forms but to make sense also.MAY GOD BLESSES YOU AND ALL YOUR GREAT RITES,WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!
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Review of Understanding  Open in new Window.
Review by Reba Smith Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
HEY ....THIS IS EXCELLENT, OUTSTANDING,AWESOME,GREAT STORY EVER READ.








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Review by Reba Smith Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poppy...my sweet buddy,this is incredibly AWESOME!!! Yes, ''GOD IS REAL,AND A LIVING HOLY SPIRIT!! YOUR story about your dad is very meaningful to me as ''I am a JESUS SERVANT AS PASTOR!!! I'm a new PASTOR,but i dedicated my whole life to GOD,that's why i remind a single woman.A million thank's for sharing your amazing story about your great dad.MAY GOD BLESSES YOU IN YOUR DAY'S,BE ALWAYS OBEDIENCE TO OUR HEAVENLY FATHER GOD JEHOVAH,IN JESUS NAME...PRAISE GOD!!! WRITE ON!
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Review of Famous Cartoons  Open in new Window.
Review by Reba Smith Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
hey angel maiko...this is surprisingly BRILLIANT MIND!!! YOUR BRILLIANT MIND IS WORKING OVERTIME,HUH,GIVE PRAISE TO YOUR CREATIVITY!!! I'M SO PROUD OF YOU,MY DEAR LOVE ONE...THAT'S WHY I DO LOVE YOU MORE EACH TIME YOU HAVE CREATED LIKE THIS...BRAVO!!! FOR GRASPING THIS...MAY GOD BLESS YOU AND ALL YOUR COMING GREAT WRITE,WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!
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Review of Unseen Architect  Open in new Window.
Review by Reba Smith Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
konnichiwa poppy...this AWESOME piece of writes.You are really a true '' GOD BELIEVER,'' that's why you've created this wit good spiritual purposes.A gave a big praise for posting this
great piece.it's nice to vist you again in your port,please kindly invited you to visit my port also and rate some of my writing,please kindly...thank's so much in advance.MAY GOD BLESS YOU AND ALL YOUR GREAT WRITES!!!
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Review by Reba Smith Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
HI GREAT WRITER...EXCELLENT WRITE. i'll be you're number one readers now,please kindly writes more of this fantasy story.the syntax is all perfectly well written.AWESOME story,thank's for gps you give in and thank's for sharing with us.I love reading it that makes me end in WOW!!! MAY GOD BLESS YOUR GREAT FANTASY STORY,KEEP ON WRITINGS!!!
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Review of Through the Storm  Open in new Window.
Review by Reba Smith Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
HI morning...OUTSTANDING,I find this a very interesting fantasy story,you are a GREAT WRITER IN THE FUTURE.Thank's for sharing this with us here in WDC.happy reading :) MAY GOD BLESS YOUR GREAT WRITES.WRITE ON !!!
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