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Review of About Life  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.0)
CharlotteRose,

Fifth line last word, did you mean burden? If so the explanation of the poem is you are part of the human race and condition. So start writing that story.

Chuck
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Review of The Passing  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.0)
Sweethonesty,

A brother is too close to lose without losing part of yourself. I know I lost my son, only forty still in his prime. Now his mother and I are alone.

Chuck
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Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.0)
YellowRose,

Good start to a childrens story, the poem could also be expanded. All in all a good piece for 11 lines.

Chuck
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Review of a future now past  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.0)
rayman77,

Interesting poem one would have to die to see forsure.

Chuck
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Review of Zephyr  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.0)
Fate Weaver,

Your poem is interesting but could have been longer.
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Review of I've Got a Secret  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (5.0)
Liam,

Good job! I really enjoyed your piece, it was well written and the Rhym and meter made this work jump off the page. Good job!


Chuck
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Review of Smaug  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (2.0)
Mata,


The first & ninth words are misspelled and the type of contest is misspelled (Cinquain). I'm not sure of what to make of it all, It sounds like nonsense.
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Review of INFINITY  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.0)
Itchey Water,

I like the subject of your poem. It seems that on this side of eternity in comparison to eternity; life is but a blink.
I really think there is somuch more you could add to this poem. To ask the questions opens many possibilities.

Chuck
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Review of GARAGE  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.5)
Itchy Water,

Good Haiku,
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Review of A Banana Split  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.5)
Tim Chiu,


Very good! I really enjoyed the piece. Good Philosophy.


Chuck
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Review of Fairy Tales  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (1.0)
Sammi,


It seems that only you know how you disguised as a fairy could be saving the world since "Chapter 4 Stella" is only known to you.

Chuck
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Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.0)
Heather,


Nice piece. It seemed to me that you could spend some time reworking the last stanza. It's as if you could get two stanzas out of the last stanza.

It's up to you after all its your poem.

Chuck
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Review of You make me sick  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
KC,


Well written poem. Good meter and rhyme. I hope you find someone that has your values.

Chuck
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Review by writerchuck
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Harrison,

Good poem. It makes me think of my world as my reality. And that the reality of another may not resemble my own at all. My bliss may be my experiance while in reality someone elses may be in misery.

Chuck

PS There is a complete lack of punctuation.
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Review of The Universe  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (3.5)
Pinguin,


Questions from with in to questions of the universe. I'm not sure just what it all means.


Chuck
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Review of Emptiness  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (3.5)
gd



Its life.

Chuck
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Review of Numb darkness  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.0)
Unwritten,

You've made a good start, but somehow it seems unfinished. What's the source of your pain? How long will you be tortured?

Chuck
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Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (5.0)
T.L.Finch,


Great poem! Your description of your confines are vivid and they express your inability to leave where you are. But wait your mind is free, free to ride the wind with the Gulls.

Chuck
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Review of What is a Lie?  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Summer,

Good piece. After I have been lied to I find it hard to see any of the truth that existed in the relationship and that's sad.

Chuck
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Review of Falling  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (3.5)
Drake Ryder,

Good subject, I wish I didn't notice at times.

Chuck
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Review of Naps  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.0)
rik,

Were you sitting behind me in church last Sunday?

Chuck
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Review of Roses and Clouds  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (3.0)
Monkea,




Smell the roses and watch the clouds at the same time. Multitask it's fun!


Chuck
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Review of A Nursery Rhyme  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.5)
Liam,


Good job! Very cleverly written.


Chuck
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Review of Nauseous  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.0)
Sufferlife,


Kind of like butterflies?

Chuck
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Review of PAST  
Review by writerchuck
Rated: E | (4.0)
Billy D Dursens,

I like your piece. I think it could be added to. The subject of dreams and reality moving down the eternal river.

Chuck
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