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Review of I was only nine  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
Tragic tale of loss, pain and growing up at a tender age. Word choice is good. Tells a story in poetic form. Good job.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Interesting beginning or is it an ending? At any rate, it leaves the reader wanting more. Good job.
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Review of Fate  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (3.5)
Great acrostic form. Gives writers pov on the subjects’ lives. Word choice though good seemed stilted at times in effort to adhere to form. All in all was a good read.
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Review of Weaving Unity  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good imagery in your piece and some very true observations.I enjoyed reading your piece. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of The Tail  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, what can I say but “The Tail” is quit a tale! A fancy feline fest with the hero winning and avoiding a CATastrophe. Cute concept. Good imagery and word choice.
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Review of Bullseye  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
A good beginning. Do you plan to expand? You leave the reader wanting to know more. Word usage is good. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of Bio  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well put! We should all strive to be up on that mountain. Good, perceptive piece. Good word choice.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice free verse and wonderful imagery. Thank you for sharing this lovely verse.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Good usage of acrostic form. Easy flow and word usage. Was this written for someone special in your life?
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Review of The Amazing Twins  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (3.0)
Interesting story line. Would love to see it expanded. There is so much potential here. However, I felt a little let down. Why did the burglar feel intimidated? I get the “Shining” reference but non-Stephen King fans might not. And, since these twins were non-verbal, they could not utter “Come play with us”.

All in all it was entertaining and left the reader with wanting a little more.
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Review of GRATEFUL HEART  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
A lovely acrostic! It would be wonderful if everyone we encounter would learn this life lesson. Thank you, Naomi for sharing!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Lakeside9,

I found your poem in the “Read a Newbie” section at WDC. First, let me extend to you a warm welcome. This is a wonderful site in which to showcase your work, and to garner feedback.

I see that this piece was written about 24 years ago. I thought it to be a good example of free verse style. It has a good flow. Your word choice paints a good picture in the reader’s mind. Laughter is a beautiful sound, but sometimes elusive.

Thank you for sharing your talent! I look forward to reading more from you!

Regards,

Nani
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Review of The Morning Light  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good morning, Zelda, and welcome to WDC! I found your poem in the “Read a Newbie” section of this site.

I am not a learned reviewer, but I do enjoy reading. I thought that your piece was a good read. Your word choice helped to paint a realistic picture in my mind of your fantasy. The flow was smooth.

I look forward to reading more of your work soon.

Regards,

Nani
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Review of All the Time  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Zeke,

I love this! I think it’s simplicity and repetition make it a wonderful read. Your faith shines through each stanza! Our God is truly good all the time, and we should praise his magnificent name continually. This piece is a praise for Him, and it has stuck into my head. I will be repeating parts of it all day! LOL!

Great job...

Dianne
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Review of Six Weeks to Live  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear donna,

I found your poem while browsing the Read and Review section here at Writing.com I have to admit, the title drew me in! I think we would all wonder what we would do presented with that dilemma.

I think your free-verse style flowed good. It certainly conveyed your choices of what to do with the time left! I see it was written for a contest. That can be a challenge! I hope you did well.

Thank you for sharing with us at WDC.
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Review of A Love So True  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Tim,

I found your poem while browsing the Read and Review section here at Writing.com.

I thought that your lines flowed smoothly. Your word choice was strong. You painted a lovely picture for the reader. Good job!

Thank you for sharing your talent with us at WDC.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Randy,

I came across your poem while browsing the Read a Newbie section of Writing.com. The title piqued my interest, so, I found I had to read and review it.

It appears that you are writing from the heart, about an incident that you experienced. If so, it is a sad tribute to your friend. I have found that people who share the same lifestyles as your late Mr. Brown, often do not listen to the voice of reason. They are hell-bent and headstrong to race down the pathfinder destruction they are on.

Your short free-verse piece tells a powerful story in a concise way. Your word choice is good and lends to your telling of the tale. Good job!

Thank you for sharing your work, and, welcome to WDC!
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Review of Insomniac  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear LadySharpie,

I found your poem while browsing the Read a Newbie section here on Writing.com. Since I often have trouble with insomnia, it was an intriguing title. I can certainly relate to the situation you describe.

The flow of your piece was smooth. I thought that your word choice was good. You conveyed your point of view to the reader. After all, isn’t that a part of writing?

Thank you for sharing your work! And, welcome to WDC.
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Review of Scars  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear inkytears,

I found your poem while browsing the Read a Newbie section here at Writing.com. Your title intrigued me.If you don’t obtain a scar or two on your journey through life, chances are, you haven’t really lived!

Your word choice conveys your emotions in this free-verse piece. Each couplet emphasizes your point of view.

Thank you for sharing your work with us! And, welcome to WDC.
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Review of Poetry- Misery  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear busybutterfly,

I found your poem while browsing the Read a Newbie section here at WDC. Your title intrigued me.

How often we let the negativity of others cause personal misery! Learning to recognize that this is happening is the first step in self-help.

Your words convey the emotion in your pieces. Good word choice! Your free verse flowed smoothly.

Thank you for sharing your work! And welcome to Writing.com.
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Review of Movies and Horses  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Tinker,

I came across your poem while browsing the Read A Newbie section here at Writing.com. Being a fan of both Movies and Horses, it caught my eye.

I thought you did a good job telling a story in poetic form. Your word choice was strong. The flow was good.

Thank you for sharing your talent with us. And, welcome to WDC.
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Review of Sensual Orchids  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Jatog the Green,

I found your poem while browsing the Read a Newbie section of Writing.com. Being an orchid lover, this caught my attention! They are such lovely specimens of nature.

It looks like this was a contest entry. I hope you fared well in the Writers Cramp.

I thought this to be a good example of the villanelle form. It can be a tricky form. Your words were well chosen. The flow was good.

Thank you for sharing your talent with us! And, welcome to WDC.
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Review of Stars  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Hemaidy,

I came across your poem while browsing the Read A Newbie section of Writing.com.

It is concise, brief, and true to form. Good descriptive words convey your point of view.

Thank you for sharing your talent with us on WDC. And, welcome!
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Review of Remember Me  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Dear Prosperous Snow,

Another great read found while visiting the Read and Review section!
The title piqued my interest.

Your word pictures were vivid. Your word choice strong. Overall, I found it enjoyable.

Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us here at WDC.
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Review of Cynic In Love  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Prosperous Snow,

I found your poem while browsing the Read & Review section of WDC. The title drew me in! Interesting perspective!

All the basics combined to make this a good read. The flow was smooth and the word choice was great!

As usual, good job!

Thanks for sharing!
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