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Overall Impression: This piece outlines the thoughts of a true "teacher".--one who cares about the lives of his/her students and their future. Good flow and end rhyme.
Suggestions: You have a typo in the second sentence that would make a better read if corrected.
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Overall Impression: A lovely, imagery filled love poem. Good flow!
Suggestions: None.
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Hello, Rising Star! I am here to review your piece for the Member to Member Review. It is my pleasure to visit your port. Although I do not profess to be an expert reviewer, I do enjoy reading. This review is meant to be helpful, and to offer suggestions to improve your craft. Please remember, however, that it is only my opinion.
Overall impression: The imagery is vivid! The message is powerful to the intended. It is tragic that so often we make the wrong choices in love, and it ends in similiar situations to the one that you describe.
Suggestions: None.
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Overall Impression: We all cherish the memories of our childhood, particularly when they involve loved ones like your grandfather. This is filled with good imagery. Your words paint vivid pictures!
Suggestions: None.
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: Your short piece gives a lot of "food for thought" about ideas and sensations that go through the minds of some on a daily basis.
Suggestions: Perhaps you might want to edit this one, and pay attention to punctuation. I think it would polish the story.
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Overall Impression: Lovely tribute to someone that you love. Beautiful imagery.
Suggestions: None.
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: Good character development. Interesting story.
Suggestions: None.
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: Your end rhymes are very good and consistent, giving a smooth flow to the piece.
Suggestions: I noticed several spelling errors, which could possibly be typos......My suggestion would be to copy and paste the piece into a word processing program like "Word" to find the errors and correct them. This is not a big problem and certainly an easy one to correct.
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Overall Impression: Good description of The Joker. Great imagery.
Suggestions: None
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Overall Impression: Vampire stories are always popular. Yours is no exception. I found it to be interesting with a smooth transition from beginning to end. Keep up the good work!
Suggestions: None.
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Overall Impression: You certainly packed a lot of action into your story. Good job! The flow of your piece was smooth, and transitioned well from beginning to end.
Suggestions: None.
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Overall Impression: An interesting "beginning" to what could easily be an entertaining longer tale. Do you have plans to expand this scifi tale?
Suggestions: None.
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Overall Impression: Your free-verse poem is filled with emotion and imagery. It flows smoothly from line to line. You display strong feelings within the lines of this piece.
Suggestions: None.
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Overall Impression: Good flow in this piece! Your words are so true. We do all hope for "discovery" into the world of published authors. Alas, for me, although I seek publication by a traditional house, it is still elusive. Rejections are about the only communication that I receive.
Suggestions: None.
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: A love poem that is filled with imagery to convey the emotions of the poet. The flow is smooth, and tells a story of how the author feels toward his/her love.
Suggestions: None.
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Overall Impression: Your free-verse poem is filled with vivid imagery. It tells a story of heartache and regret.
Suggestions: None.
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Overall Impression: Your poem is filled with a lot of vivid iimagery. The flow is good.
Suggestions: None.
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Overall Impression: Intriguing point of view. Good imagery.
Suggestions: None.
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: Free verse with a good flow. This piece is filled with imagery.
Suggestions: Consider the spacing on your piece. When it appears for review, it is doublespaced. I think it would be more "appealing" if it were singlespaced in the stanzas, with doublespacing between them. However, this is merely a suggestion, and does not detract from the content of the poem.
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Overall Impression: An impressionable telling of a "night out" with friends and acquaintances.
Suggestions: In the fifth paragraph, fifth sentence, I think that you omitted the word "body" (that might not be the word you meant....not sure).
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Overall Impression: Very interesting! It does sound like the year 2000 was indeed a pivotal point in your life. Thank you for sharing.
Suggestions: None.
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Overall Impression: Charming story about Yoda and Holley! Pets have a way of wrapping us around their paws, don't they?
Suggestions: None.
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Overall Impression: A sad tale told in poetic form! Life isn't always scripted, is it? Your imagery was good. The flow is smooth. Good job!
Suggestions: None.
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Overall Impression: You have the beginnings of an entertaining story.
Suggestions: I think you need to enlist the help of a good editor it would be a great piece, perhaps one that could be lengthened into a good book. There are many people here on WDC that would be able to give you assistance with this, and they would be glad to offer their suggestions. Good luck!
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Overall Impression: A piece that is full of lovely imagery. Good job with your descriptive lines.
Suggestions: Perhaps you should check the usage of "loose" in the title. I think it might be better to use "lose", but this is only a suggestion.
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Regards,
Nani
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