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Review of Follicular Folly  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Dear ShaNoWriMo,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Very entertaining! I can relate....I have days like that, too! Your word choice makes the reader feel as if he/she is a part of the telling of your tale.

Suggestions: *Smile*None

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of Today...Tomorrow  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Such wisdom is found within your rhyming couplets! Thank you for sharing your insight.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of I've read  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: How true your piece resonates with me! I enjoyed your poem that tells of many of the phases of life in one of the most powerful mediums available....the written word. Thank you for sharing.

Suggestions: *Smile*None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of I AM  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear tangerinedream,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Wonderful imagery throughout this lovely piece. He is always with us no matter what we do or where we go. We just have to realize that He always walks beside us. Thank you for sharing.

Suggestions: *Smile*None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
Dear Nikola,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Such a poignant piece! Your imagery is outstanding. I can see that beautiful willow as she dances that final dance. Thank you for sharing.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear janice,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Lovely tribute to your sons. Good rhyme scheme and smooth flow.

Suggestions: *Smile*None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of I Miss Buttons  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Kat,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Very good story explaining the death of a pet. Sometimes little ones (and us older ones, too) don't always understand when we lose something that we love. Oftentimes, we blame ourselves, even when we know that we are not responsible. I think you did a great job of making your point.

Suggestions: *Smile*None

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of Disease Spreads.  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Dear StaiNed,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Good flow in your free-verse piece. While the story told seemed a bit dark, it was well-written and filled with great imagery.

Suggestions: *Smile* Just a minor one.....In the fourth stanza, fifth line, I think you possibly meant "you're" instead of "your".....I sometimes have problems with those pesky contractions myself.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of Today  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear .enn,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Sometimes we can only appreciate our current situation after we have been through adversity. I think that your piece flowed well. You expressed good emotions about feelings and "hanging" in there to see an issue through to its end.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Dear N. Cain,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Cute concept. With a little effort, it could be turned into a children's story.
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Suggestions: *Smile* I think that you have the basics of a good tale. It just needs a little polish. Unfortunately, I am not a qualified editor who can assist you with the rudiments, but there are others here at WDC who can assist you with a line-by-line review. Good luck!

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Cosimo,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Concise free-verse piece. The flow was smooth, and the imagery was good.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Dear Jayde,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Your story line is good. It gives the story of the character's demise from her point of view in retrospect.

Suggestions: *Smile*I think that you would benefit from a line by line review. While I am not qualified to provide this service for you, there are others here on WDC who can do this. I noticed several grammatical errors/typos that are minor. I think that you have a great beginning, it just needs a little polish. Good luck with this!

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Thump Thump Beep  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Aila Jade,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: So many times, our actions lead us to pathways of destruction. Your poem speaks of a life that ended much too soon, and the character realizes that she has unfinished issues that will never be resolved. Well written. I enjoyed the unusual style.....good job!

Suggestions: *Smile* None

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of help  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear swiftti24,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: It is a terrible feeling to lose your way.....Your concise verse conveys this feeling. Thank you for sharing!

Suggestions: *Smile* Only a minor one.....In line 4, "dispare" should be "despair". Also, a question.....did you choose not to capitilize "i" for emphasis?

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Mysterious  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear arrow,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Concise! Your free-verse style flowed smoothly. Interesting rhetorical questions.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear zoey,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: It is good to read how much you appreciate your mom and dad's parenting skills. Many children are so resentful of this. Thank you! Apparently, your parents taught you a great deal about life.

Suggestions: *Smile* Unforunately, I am not a qualified reviewer. I am only a member here, as you are. I think you have a good piece, that would benefit by a line by line review. There are others on WDC who can provide this service for you. I wish you good luck with this.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of Stars  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Karolyne,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: I love "star gazing". They always fascinate me! Good job on your piece. Your end rhyme was very good.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Jacob,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Nice piece showing gratitude and thanks to someone who helped you in the past. Good rhyme and rhythm.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of The Triangle  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Dear ScaryScribe,

Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: I found your story to be very good---exactly as you planned! Nice read!

Suggestions: *Smile* None

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Bethany Ray,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Your submission letter gives a good synopsis of your book. It gives the reader an idea of what your manuscript is all about. Good luck with your project.

Suggestions:None. *Smile*

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of The Haunted Room  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Michael Romeo,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Very eerie! It would be a good piece for Halloween! You accomplished a good story in so few words.

Suggestions: None.*Smile*

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of My Poetic Mind  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Poetic,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: I think that all of "us" have experienced these thoughts. Good job! You have certainly captured how many of us get through another day.

Suggestions:None that would improve the poem. *Smile*

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of The Climb  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Kings,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: A lovely tribute to your brother.

Suggestions: None*Smile*

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of Feel  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Lell,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: A lovely free-verse piece. Great flow (very smooth)! It is as you described it--sweet and gentle!

Suggestions:None. *Smile*

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of Love No More  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Onyx Wolf,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Good rhyme scheme repeated through all verses. It was entertaining! It told a sad tale, however of a love lost, and a confidence breached that might never be restored again.

Suggestions: None*Smile*

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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